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Summertime Slut
by Missy

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Comment by Sharon on 11/19/09
A georgeous story.It would be every young boys dream.
Comment by Missy on 04/26/06
   Please put more thought into your spelling and grammar, and while we are talking, tell us more about the thoughts of your character.  In one day he went from being discovered to sucking a cock?  Why, how, had he thought about this before? Was it a fantasy of his?  Was he forced and blackmailed?  If so, he put up no fight at all.  Great idea, poor story.
Comment by julie j on 10/11/04
well done a good story very wicked of his mother to set this all up and disgusting that his aunt made money out of it his cousins were wicked as well but a good story well done more please
Comment by Pauline on 07/19/04
Hi Missy, Your stories are great!!!! I hope you do many more as I love them!!

BUT - Your spelling and punctuation are absolutely atrocious!!

I have never in all my life read such unadulterated bad spelling and punctuation. For pity's sake use the spell check on your computer or you are going to lose a lot of readers.
For example their is not spelled as thier as you have it. A very simple word which makes me think that you are not well educated. Possibly not your fault.

Come on love! Take a little more time with your stories and make sure the spelling and punctuation are correct - It makes all the difference in the world.

Try again pet

best wishes

Pauline


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