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Summer Cruise
by Sarah London

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Comment by Lorelei on 04/20/15
Deliciously fabulous escapist fare.  What better way for a guy to enjoy a beautiful summer cruise than as a gal?  Right down to the lovely undies and gorgeous gams.

I also loved the ending.  If you can't go home as a woman, at least be a woman under your britches.


Comment by Alison Barlow on 07/19/02
Great story,
I liked the device of disguise and his choice at the end one I think I would have made.
love the swimsuit bikini aspect, prehaps the complexety of the ship and its crew could have been explored more.
Keep 'em coming
Ali x

Comment by Nancy Roberts on 04/07/01
Great Story. I wished it were me. Let's have more. How about something involving an understanding and helpful wife.

Comment by "Princess Pervette" on 02/25/01
A very gratifying tale!  Just enough compulsion to be exciting,
but not so much it's nasty.  And the ending was sweet.  Enough
to make any of us wish we were "Arabella"!

Pervy



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