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The Student
by Alyssa Davis

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Comment by april on 11/05/12
another lovely story full of longing and the need to be complete.

very well written soft and gentle


Comment by Silvia. on 05/31/10
Hi Alyssa.
The best part of the story is the end, when she makes SRS and she marries.
But I loved the story. Great job.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Aleesha on 11/03/08
Thankyou for yet another great story. You have such a great gift. I have noticed you have not posted any new stories for some time. This is such a pity.

Comment by shalimar on 11/12/07
The only problem I had with the story is that you used male terms for Leslie after she was on hormones.  The question is NOT weather she is a genetic girl at that time but is she a "real girl."  If she isn't then she doesn't need the SRS.

shalimar


Comment by julie j on 02/25/05
good story a happy ending & understanding mother

Comment by Kristina Ward on 12/02/01
Great story. Nice ending.



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