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by Virginia Kane

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Comment by MaryLou on 06/21/09
A wild ride, and enough hilarity to provide entertainment as well.

Comment by Diane Sutton on 01/01/02
What a wonderful story. Oh I just wish a place like this really existed so that I could book myself in for the change. Oh, maybe not all of it but I'd love to have most of it.

The story is very interesting and is done is a very well layed out manner. Here the main character is having a slight problem with his mouth engaging before his brain kicks in. The treatment is to alter his mind and his overweight body.

Virginia does a splendid gob of telling the details of the change taking place and by her use of words fitting the story she delivers a tale that is well worth the time to read it.

I for one love the use of mind altering drugs, hypnosis, and such to change someone. It is possible to do this and brings some realism to the story context.



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