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The Sorority Trap
by CJ

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Comment by Guest on 10/18/20
I hope you finish this story one day.

I initially read it a couple years ago and just found it again. It's right up my alley (slow, public feminization where the guy hates it).

Does anyone else have similar recommendations? Some of my favorite are from Kate on asubmissivesissy.com. Slightly younger (high school age) but similar story where they're slowly feminized and humiliated.


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Comment by Silvia. on 05/17/11
Do you really think that women are that bad?
You don't like women! Am I right?

Comment by Guest on 04/18/10
I think the people that think this story is disgusting are wrong. Reading this it is pretty obvious Jimmy enjoys this at least a little. If he was disgusted by this scenario he wouldn't go along as far as he has. Forced feminization only works when people want to go along with it. If he absolutely hated it he wouldve let the pictures come out or sit and talk about another solution. There are several references to him being aroused as well.

Comment by DJ on 11/16/07
This is a horrible story. They all laugh at him. Why doesn't jimmy go to the police the proof is the pictures they took of him. Also do they think it's funny when they humilated the the poor kid enough to go on a school shooting in the sorority house or commit suicide. He borowed some clothes and he brought them back dirty. They scared this kid for life!!! This cannot have a ending where he will accept he is a tranny and continue to cross dress. It'll probably end with him commiting suicide or killing the girls or going to the police. Because those endings make sense.  This is not a valid reason for the sorority to do this to Jimmy. Good story. But I am sickened by this story. It makes women look bad very, very, very bad.

Comment by cheryl on 02/10/07
What happen did ypu get writters block

Comment by juliej on 05/27/06
an excelllent continuation of this story he is learning the hard way what a pity they do not have sorietys in the uk Imust admit i would have thought it would be great if i was in his place more stories or parts of this one please

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 11/22/05
After part 3
Will these evil bitches be laughing when he breaks and enters the house with AK-47 blazing?  Or kills himself publicly leaving a letter describing in detail what drove him to it?  This story really makes women look bad!  And Sandra is the worst.

BUT, it's not all one-sided; I wonder what would have happened if he had done the right thing and gotten the clothes cleaned before returning them?  Also, he is being a wimp.  He should just tell them all to go to hell and not worry about the pics - get his story out to the tabloids first, though.

Comment by julie j on 05/18/05
its a great story well writen &explained please write more soon

Comment by Alice on 02/19/03
CJ
It is a full year since you submitted the thgird chapter.I have won out a dozen pair of panties waiting for the next installment of Tiffany's transformatgion into a sorority girl.There are sdo many delicious, sexy possibilities. Would it be ok for someone else to add chapters, though the writing and scenes will not be as good as yours?
It's unfair to us and to Tiffany who is just dying to have her first formal gown and to be seduced by one of the fraternity jocks

Comment by Meliissa Wright on 12/30/02
I loved the story.  Not to recently my Mom started dressing my brothers in panties to gain a little control over them. My older brother is 21 and my younger brother is 15.  I really think my older likes it
Missy

Comment by dani on 12/05/02
first of all...i just discovered this story site and absolutely love it. in fact, i can't wait to post a story, or two, myself. I'm not a big fan of magical transformation themes, etc. this story, however, it just my cup of tea. it's forceful and tender at the same time. it makes me wish i was jim/tiffany...i'm soooo jealous of him/her. i know the author will add more installments...after all, anyone who can write with this much compassion won't leave us admiring readers hanging for too much longer. thanks for a great effort.
*dani*

Comment by Barbara Lynn on 11/19/02
Well, first of all, the girls should conspire with the frat brothers to make Jimmy/Tiffany, a sorority pledge full time. Then when she is actually inducted as a sister, her "maid" chores are done, but that is not the end of the humiliation. Once s/he becomes a sorority sister, he has to have breast implants and take hormones to make him a really beautiful girl. Then s/he's to find a male date for on campus and wear his frat pin so that everyone will know that s/he belongs to someone male. But, before s/he can be a full sister, the last of Jimmy/Tiffany's "maid" assignment is to make her own prom gown and wear it to the prom. Like it was said, there are so many plausible possibilities to this story and I don't think the author is done yet.

Barb  

Comment by Sara on 10/18/02
I keep coming back looking for additional parts of the story.  It is one of my favorites.

I hope you keep the tension building like in part 2 where he is forced to wear the small sorority bracelet.  Just adding little things more jewerly, full time feminine underwear and on to outerwear knowing full well each step is moving him closer to wearing a skirt full time.  Maybe even work the supposedly uncomfortable things like a tight corset, very tight skirt, stockings, and heels for an outing would be wonderful.  (the girls could even require he wear these things under his male clothes and return a day or two later for additional duties.  The story has so many possibilities.  I truly wish additional parts were released soon

Comment by Alice on 10/04/02
I cum back to this story from time to time because it is my fav. But I am disappointed that CJ has not completed the story. I keep imaging the next scene: Jimmy/Tiffany has done all the housework dressed in her sexy bra and panties. The  sorority sisters order her to have a hard on all the time, and she does so by imagining that she is making love to a hung guy. Finally her work is done and she is allowed to put on tailored female slacks that zip up on the side and have no packets, along with a frilly pink top. It is almost midnight, but she is kicked out of the sorority house and tries to sneak into her dorm room. Quietly, without turning on the lights, Tiffany takes off the top and slacks and is about to remove her pretty brahen her roommake notices her scanties and starts to feel her up. The guy is aroused by Tiffany's outfit and forces her to suck him off. As she does, Tiffany notices that her cock is tenting her panties. She is getting turned on by having to service a guyt. When he is done and squits into her mouth, Tiffany erupts into the best organusm in her life. drenching her panties in sperm. At this point, tiffinany knows that she will live as a girl, and her one desire is to be one of the most popular fucks on campus.

Comment by jenny on 06/08/02
love the story, and i can not wait to see what the girls have in store for Tiffany, the possibilites are endless, go to class in skirts, dates, etc.

Comment by Lorenzo on 04/19/02
Very interesting!

Comment by Alice on 03/17/02
I cannot understand the complaints about forcing Jimmy to be a maid. Forced feminity is the coree of thiss genre, and CJ's touch here is seductive and caring. Unfortunate, we've gone more than a month without an additional chapter, so maybe CJ thinks the story is done with Jimmy agreeing that he is Tiffany. I hope not. There's lot more to getting Tiffany to be a girl. CJ can build up the tention in the next part by having Tiffany go to classes wearing a skirt, but without any change in her hair style, makeup, etc. So everyone will see that it is really Jimmy who is flashing her panties and letting the guys cop a feel This would be a wonderful scene to get Jimmy to realize that she must be a girl full time and there is no going back to her old life.

Comment by Diane Sutton on 03/05/02
For the most part I enjoyed the story as it was well formed and kept my interest for the entire 3 parts.

I would have liked to have the sorority find something else to do rather than turn this poor boy into a maid for them. But, I'm sure that there are many others who enjoy and look forward to making a male into a maid.

I would have liked it if they took him in and made him a new member of their group and treated as an equal. However, this story is well done and will continue to give much for those who take the effort to read and enjoy the talent of this author.

I'd like to read another story by her if she takes the time to do something else.

Diane

Comment by Prue on 02/25/02
WELL... this isn't quite my kind of story, but i promised cj i'd read them. i have a problem with the vindictiveness of the sorority. aren't they being as bad as they claim the fraternity is. two wrongs don't make a right. anyway the story itself is well planned and well written. just not my cup of tea ...sorry CJ.huggles from prue

Comment by Janice on 02/22/02
The story keeps getting better, but the pacce is oh soo slow that I have a hard time keeping it hard. The direction the story is going is clear. Tiffany will become a sorority sister and fill out her first formal gown beautifully. Maybe one of the frat brothers will take her to the prom, and we will be able to find out whether Tiffany is really becoming a female. Perhaps she will seduce a frat brother into her new life, so that he will become the next sorority maid.
I hope the author has Tiffany going to classes each day in more girly attire, such as open toe sandals, red painted toenails, heels, a frilly blouse, necklace, earrings, etc. But I also hope that CJ keeps Tiffany's face the same till the end of the story, so that we can feel Jimmy's torment as he dresses as a girl but still looks like a guy. And CJ, maybe allow Tiffany to get a female do-over only when she consents to live the rest of her life as a girl.

Comment by Janice on 02/22/02
The story keeps getting better, but the pacce is oh soo slow that I have a hard time keeping it hard. The direction the story is going is clear. Tiffany will become a sorority sister and fill out her first formal gown beautifully. Maybe one of the frat brothers will take her to the prom, and we will be able to find out whether Tiffany is really becoming a female. Perhaps she will seduce a frat brother into her new life, so that he will become the next sorority maid.
I hope the author has Tiffany going to classes each day in more girly attire, such as open toe sandals, red painted toenails, heels, a frilly blouse, necklace, earrings, etc. But I also hope that CJ keeps Tiffany's face the same till the end of the story, so that we can feel Jimmy's torment as he dresses as a girl but still looks like a guy. And CJ, maybe allow Tiffany to get a female do-over only when she consents to live the rest of her life as a girl.

Comment by Lesley on 02/22/02
I am enjoying the story.  I can't wait for the next part.

Comment by Allison on 02/20/02
My girlfriend and I are trying to copy Jimmy/Tiffany's slow, sexy transformation. So I am wearing a femmy bracelet, bra and panties, girl's jeans, and a powder blue sweater. I have to serve as a girl friend's maid,doing all the dishes and laundry, keeping the house neat, speaking only when permitted, thanking her for the privilege of becoming a girl, and curtseying to her. All this is private, just like in Tiffany's story. The only difference is that if I am a good girl, my fiancee fucks me, and letss me cum.
We are eager to guess the next moves in the story. Will Tiffany be forced to pierce her ears and get earrings; will she have to wear a blouse to school, and of course, when will she get to wear that formal gown, and what will she do on the inevitable date with her former frat brother. I do hope that Tiffany (myself) accepts her feminization, but only under constant psychological and physical pressure.

Comment by Alice on 02/19/02
I love the story and and retracing Jimmy's (tiffany's) transformation in my own apartment. The onlky problems are that I've ruined more than one pair of panties, and yes girls I do shop at Victoria's Secret. My mind is racing to where the story will go next and to the point when Jimmy/Tiffany not only accepts herself as a sorority girl but has to make out with the frat guys s/he once wanbted to b part of. Please keep the pace slow, but give us the chapters more quickly

Comment by DeeDee Clark on 02/16/02
The girls are being vindictive. Where is his fraternity? Why aren't they helping him? Or are they gutless? After all it was their idea. Soften up on the poor guy.

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 02/15/02
I really like the story.  My only comment is it seems so one-sided.  I wish you'd give Jim some more backbone., and please don't let him fall for the good cop/bad cop scam they are playing on him by Sandera and kim.  I'd like to see him really lose his temper with Sandra and let her know how he really feels about what's being done to him.  He certainly doesn't deserve what's being done to him.  Also, if his frat brothers know what's going on, how come they aren't planning a way to help him?  If the point is to get him to where he wants to be a sorority girl, Maybe he could get in a fix and the sorority could rally to help their pledge, Tiffany, while his frat rejects Jim.

Comment by Amber Palmer on 02/15/02
I've enjoyed all three parts very much.  I especially like the relatively slow way the momentum builds and at first the changes are subtle.   Now that Jim (Tiffany) is wearing panties and a bra under his sorority shirt and girls designer jeans, I wonder how long it will be before he's sporting lip gloss and almost clear nail polish.  Keep up the great work.  I'm eagerly anticipating Part 4.

Comment by Nikki on 02/07/02
I REALLY agree with Joanne so please hurry up and relieve a bit of the suspense. I've got to say that my favourite "small thing" was the the way you introduced and made him wear the maids cap (it would have been so easy, and too early, to make him wear the full uniform). Also, I've always liked seeing reluctant boys having to refer to themselves as girls.
Oh! It's very well written too. Thanks!

Comment by Joanne on 01/05/02
I do wish you'd hurry up and let us see part three.  

Comment by jessica on 12/12/01
Outstanding. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Comment by donny on 11/24/01
its a great story and i'm lookin forward to seeing what else the girls have planned for him.  

Comment by Pat on 11/22/01
This is really getting good. I just love it. All the little small things like the jewerly, jeans, and the big one, the shirt. All this is fun to read.

Please continue.

Comment by Donna on 11/22/01
Part 2 is even better.You're able to build tension merely by having the male wear a small sorority bracelet. Keep the episodes coming.

Comment by Linda on 11/17/01
Great start.  Keep it up.

Comment by skorcher on 11/17/01
Great start will thought out hope you will do part two soon !!
Keep writing!!!

Comment by scrambler_j on 11/16/01
I agree.  This is a great start.  For me I'm hoping that his is a long story about Jim's slow transformation into one of the sorority members.  The girls seem to hold all the cards and its only a matter of time before Jim is back in dress, and perhaps over time for good.  Keep up the great job.  I'll be looking forward to future chapters.

-jake-

Comment by Donna on 11/16/01
Good start. Keep the tension of the male being compelled to obey the sorority sisters.

Comment by Donna on 11/16/01
Good start. Keep the tension of the male being compelled to obey the sorority sisters.



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