Loved the story, please finish it off,I'm during to find out about the Father and Davina. I do love this type of story the father's always seem to end up in hospital or are killed.

I really enjoyed your stoy i hoopse you will finish it verry well written

Andrea Mccall, should be arrested, judged guilty, and be sent to jail.
She forced her son to change into a girl against his will, and was the cause of the accident of her husband.
She isn't a good mother nor a good wife. She only thinks in herself.
I didn't like it. It could be a good story if she wasn't so selfish.
She should have talked with her husband and son, about his looks like a girl.
She is evil.
Silvia.

An excellant story hope to read more to a conclusion

wonderful story...more...PLEASE!

I have read this three times now and ave always hoped for more. It is a brilliant story, well handled, with multiple interacting plots and sub plots. But...
When are you going to give us more?

Hugs and kisses

Caralouise

What's wrong with the mother.
Are she trying to force him into being a girl?

That's not natural.
If you're caring for your offspring you do not force them into changing gender.
Seems like a twisted mind to me.

Yoron.

Loved your story so far and am hoping you will continue it so all your readers can see how Davina, Gail, Samantha, Andrea all develop during the next fours years. Also want to see what happens to Father.You have made a sweet story into a real mystery story, so it needs an ending sometime. Hugs,

the 3&4 parts of this story were intresting but not as exciting as the first two parts but it was good

the first 2 parts of this story are well wrtten its amazing how things happen this to me seems like a set up but its impossible to decide i have enjoyed this so far its goingto beintersting how things pan out and what happens next i loook forwards to reading the next installments well done

OK  when is the next chapter ????  Good clean fun reading
love the plot and look forward to the high school years...
Keep  us imformed of his/her progress....
Thank you for a good story    Rone

I loved the story. I was dissapointed that it really has no ending. I have been guessing how things would turnout while reading the story. Don't be mean. You just have to write an ending to this wondrful creation of yours. Do not wait too long. I am dying to know the real ending.  Laura

Andrew,

Your loyal readers would greatly appreciate your posting additional chapters of this great story. I have read it several times since the last posting, and can't wait to see how the many problems are resolved.

Zip

an excellent story it was very underhand the way davids mother dealt with him without even saying any thing the accident to there father could give a lot of fod for thought as to another part of this story if he dies for example or finds his sex is different this would be a great chance to give the story a great ending if the father dies then i think it would be good for davids mother to go the whole way with him at first to keep the story interesting being underhand with things like hormone injection and then leading on from then there is a whole lot of scpe available for this story that for the first four parts is brilliant hopefully the story will be kept up well done a great story more please.

A VERY ENJOYABLE STORY WITHOUT THE USUAL TRASH TALK. THIS TRANSITION BEGINS UNDERHANDLY BY "MUM" BUT IS NICELY DONE. EVEN THO YOU LAST WROTE IN 2001 I HOPE YOU CAN GIVE US AT LEAST 2 OR 3 MORE PARTS

dear Andrew you just have to complete the story, its a lovely tale so different to many love terri

Sweet kids and lots o' transatlantic realism. Don't you just want them to find their happy ending? I don't feel soiled after reading this, either, unlike some other offerings.

 I'm so glad to see that you have returned with two more long sections of this excelent 'true-to-life' type story.  We need more like this, and I hope you'll want to try further tales that enable us to really fit into the shoes of transgendered persons experiencing realistic adventures.

 I also enjoyed the highly-believable relationships among all the younger characters. I feel that so much of our stesses and dreams become apparent and crystallize during adolescence, there can never be too many tales which seek to play out the countless situations as well as painful struggles for youngsters seeking support and understanding for their(our) 'mis-fitted' natures and  fantasies.

More! More!

Over the last year or so, I have become jaded in reading TG.  Thus, many stories fail to catch my attention, much less, keep it.  I just finished my second reading of 'Soccer Queen' and am looking forward to its continuation.

Good writing, Andrew.

 Yes,  Keep this wonderful story going, and unfolding.  I hope you don't make  drunken Daddy become a girl TOO abruptly...So far it's quite believable.  Maybe he'll have to get used to Davina, then his new daughter  might demonstrate for him some of the joys of being feminine !

 I've read  a few similar plots, but this is one of the best.  Your knack for dialogue is excellent.

I started reading this well-written, enjoyable serial at Sapphire's, and look forward to the opportunity of catching up with the story here.

Loved your story. Hope you continue on through Divina's high school years as a ball player on the girls team. Thanks for a good read.

Please continue this story as it is very interesting.