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Sixteen, And Just a Girl
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Comment by Mariah on 05/07/13
This turned out to be a great romance story made possible by friends and family that show unconditional love. I feel it has many forms because it isn't limited to family or relatives. The limo and honeymoon suite put the icing on the cake, that was total acceptance for what would be to come in the future and proved unconditional love from her parents as well as future inlaws...lets face it, they all conspired this together for the happiness of their children. Well done Janet! Comment by Aleesha on 12/03/09 I keep saying this but tou tell by far the best stories about CD's, TV's etc. I am envious of Dianne as she was given every opportunity to be become a woman. As always you have told a great story. Thanks. Comment by Aleesha on 12/03/08 I have read a few stories similar to this but this was the best one I have enjoyed. Well done and thanks. Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/25/07 What started out as a weird party idea became reality for Diane and Bill. Janet, GREAT CINDERELLA STORY!! Heck, you even let her get pregnant!!! Comment by Emmie Dee on 12/07/00 All Janet's stories are must-reads for me, and this is up to her usual standard of excellence. Comment by Alyssa Davis on 12/05/00 Another excellent story.... Comment by Pickles on 12/05/00 As usual after reading one othe Goddesses stories I am awash in the warm and fuzzies. Comment by Paul jutras on 12/03/00 Nothing like turning a sweet sixteen party into a coming out party. Another excellent well worth reading job. |
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