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Scrambled Souls
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Comment by johnny on 05/05/09
hi julia, Comment by Silvia. on 03/25/09 Amazing story! Fantastic! Comment by Silvia (from Brazil) on 03/24/09 That's a real love story, congratulations by this! Comment by Tiffany Taylor on 11/20/08 Just wanted to say I loved the story. I know its been a long time since this was published but you still deserve my praise. Comment by Paul on 07/29/08 I enjoyed this story a lot. The confusion you describe after the switch is really interesting. Lot of details are really well found and bring a lot to the story. Comment by Volka on 10/16/07 I love this story but there is one thing that get on my nevers whenever reading AR a mind of about 2-5 can hold more then any other mind. I know that the main reason for not letting the mind keep the memory was to be able to leave them stuck. Other then that i love this story i hope that you will wright allot more. Comment by chris2 on 06/20/07 great story .thank you Comment by Vivien on 02/28/07 Well, I finished the story. Excellent! This is my type of reading as far as Science Fiction is concerned. Adventure and bonding in the family way of bonding and the same with friendship. Everyone working together in order to accomplish their goals. Comment by Vivien on 02/25/07 I have so far reached chapter thirteen and find this story just plain great! It may be science fiction but it is also plausible seeings as how we have come so far in our own generation and have also learned that anything can be reached with imagination and science. Comment by Jennifer on 02/24/07 Dear Julia, Comment by Heptrix on 02/18/07 Julie,it was well worth the wait.Your characters were flesh out and believiable.Excellent story line.I read your other stories as well and they are very good.Thanks for the privledge of reading your talented writing."Keep pushing the pen to the paper" Comment by Jerrod on 11/06/02 I found this story absolutly captivating!! The entire story was astoundingly fantastic! I couldn't stop reading! The development is truly unique, and the detail in the way the charicters think and how they changed over the course of time was truly inthralling! I hope to read more, and soon! I hope so anyway. Comment by Eric on 05/30/02 I tried to E-mail you, but it bounced. Very good indeed. The discription of the brain body influencing the mind was extremely well done and the story flowed well. Many nice touches - like Pat bringing a bimbo to the wedding! I think in the next part you may need a little more conflict. Like the search party discovering something mysterioous or dangerous. Or one of the people who lost a great young body is jealous and causes problems. Comment by Prudence on 05/21/02 well i did it. i finished reading your story. great job julia, just one thing ... dont make us wait so long for the naet chapter lol. it amazes me how you keep track of all your characters. you must have a figurine set with everyone maked and little tags saying where there at lol i know i couldn't manage that many . huggles from your fan and friend prue Comment by Dayna on 05/20/02 what a relief! Comment by Joanne on 05/20/02 Lots of fun! I'm looking forward to the next installment! :o) Comment by jed on 05/19/02 Thanks for Part 4!!!!!!! Comment by Geoff on 05/19/02 I take back the comment I made in my 'Transposed Melody' review! You've really been working hard Julia, so thanks. Now I have actually to read episode 4. I'm sure I'll enjoy it - either way you'll hear! Comment by Terry on 02/28/02 I don't know who that imposter was, but it wasn't me. I just finisdhed this story (what was posted) and found it highly entertaining and intelligently written. It did get a little dicey in the beginning with Dan and Dan, Jr. I didn't notce the Jr. the first time and wondered, 'I thought Dan was married to Patricia, not Vicky?' Anyway, you feel a connection with these characters, which is the mark of an excellent writer. You want to hug the sympathetic characters and punch the running lights out of the prick characters. Please continue with this saga. Comment by Terry on 01/15/02 I really like all of your stories, but I thought I'd post the review here as a way of encouraging you to continue on this story. Comment by Zip on 06/03/01 WoW! I just finished the third section. I can never keep that many characters straight when reading, much less when writing. I have to type up a table and and list the important items for each character. Comment by KJ on 05/15/01 PLEASE Do not make us wait 6 months for the next installment of this great story!!! Comment by Geoff on 05/10/01 A week or so ago someone (Tigger?) suggested a theme for a story (I think on the Fictionmania board) which just about echoes 'Scrambled Souls'. I knew I'd read the story somewhere but couldn't find it on my story overloaded hard drive. Then your update brought it all back. Comment by Mr Man on 05/10/01 This is a big story with lots of charactors and things going on, but you have pulled it off nicely. You have created an interesting world, and I eagerly await your next installment. Thanks for writing. Comment by Phil on 05/07/01 Nice story. The twins are my favorites - hope to hear more about them in the next part. Comment by Jeffrey on 05/07/01 Wow, what a story! I love your writing and I always look for your stories before others.So glad to see that your back. Comment by Paula Jutras on 05/07/01 The re-election part of part 3 lost a bit of my interest but I enjoyed the rest. Especially explaining that girls always wear shirts or blouses. (Of course that's a western thing) since in some part of Asia women do go in public on real hot days without tops and its nautal. Comment by Stu Foster on 01/07/01 Hi, Comment by Danielle on 01/07/01 Hi. I hope you haven't stopped working on your stories because of anything I may have said. I've really enjoyed your works so far. Please keep writing. Comment by Coyote M Bishop on 01/07/01 Murphy's Law could never be more chaotic. What an adventure: new planet, new lives, new equipment and new perspectives. Parents who are now children and adults without much of a childhood disrupt families. There's a lot to learn and to accept. In the process, it's the question of who is going to survive the hormone change. Comment by Noel Lexicon on 12/14/00 Julia, Comment by Dana on 11/25/00 I just wanted to say that I enjoy the characterisation. You're doing a good job of taking a large group and dealing with many different people. I've notice and I may be wrong in this but the gender reversed characters seem to be universally hating their bodies. Comment by Jed on 11/24/00 Julia Manchester is quickly becoming one of my favorite authors. There is something for nearly everyone in this story. MtoF, FtoM, MtoM, FtoF, young to old, old to young, etc. |
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