ilIW3A I am amazed  with the abundance of interesting articles on your site! The author - good luck and wish you the new interesting posts..!

 

     Wow what  a wonderful story !!! I was  crying  all the  time!!! I love the way everyone  is  always  so beautiful . Not at all like  a trip to Walmart ...I keep grading these using the number scale at the top of each chapter ...but this story  is really  much better than the sum of it's parts . I would so love to read mre stories  like this !!! You are simply  a great writer with a real understanding  of what many of us  are going through ,no matter what our gender or what we choose to wear .... I had  alot of enjoyment reading this one !! Thank you !!!

Bad and disgusting story.
Silvia.

I thought it was a beautiful and very moving story. my first thought was that micky was going to get caught and be forced into being a  she male. i was so engrossed with it as the story progressed,i was in tears most of the time ,wishing  why couldent it happen to myself years ago.( i am half in half out of the closet,but not brave enough to go the whle way.)  

I read over the comments and see that by not opening up your minds, you do not see that all of this is helping Michelle realize why a stereotype is so hurtful. You as well are the guys being temporarily transformed.  Why be "Male" or why be "female."  I can relate to this story in so many ways that It is tearful.   I cried in parts.  I laughed, I felt the pain suffered by so many.  I am transgendered and proud.  There are times you need to be forced into a situation, which to the narrow minded would consider "torture" but in reality makes you open your eyes to the real world and being you and happy for you.  Thank you for this story, and alas 8 years later I still hope to see this story finish.  

I stopped reading this story in the middle of episode 4, but I was losing interest long before. Whatever happens to Michelle, the loss of freedom isn't worth it. Who wants someone else in charge of your life in such a way? not me!

I would just like to say I didn't want the story to end, it had me gripped right until the last line thankyou so much you confirmed all I believe in as a human and hopefully i will find my Diana too!.

Sh*
Reading Chapter three to the end I find there are so many objectionable ideas incorporated that I don't even know where to start..
And do you really expect anyone to trust characters like those, sorry but this has to be the proper name for that kind of females, sick bitches?
Except Dogs of course.

And yourself?
Would you trust them

A pity.
This tastes like pure manure.
Now I am disappointed.

yoron.

Sorry but being on chapter three of this strange story.

One of the worst punishments there are is solitary confinement.
Most people being treated that way comes out insane.
Yes, it's so very true and as this kid already had had one bad experience with his father?
So that is a No No as I consider your story..

Kidnapping is a very dangerous thing and as the courts consider it not far away from killing someone.
Which should leave this kid in imminent danger at all times.
The whole setting makes me questioning the story.
As for the police not getting involved when people got 'brainwashed'?
Don't think so.

It's not that your imagination are bad or that your writing is in any way boring.
You just need to create a proper 'framing' to your tale that one can accept.
And as you seem to want a 'happy ending' in your stories, you need to be aware of how you treat your characters from the very beginning.

Cheers
Yoron.

Cheers
Yoron.

an excellent peice of fiction that tackles the questions of so called society is the best way i can put it

i have read the first three installments which are doing very well enought to keep me we interested in this so ar its a great story i hope that the story continues on the same lines and leads to mant more twists &turns well done

I just re-read this series after four years.  Apparantly the first time through I never got past chapter four.  from my comments at that time, I would guess the bondage and chains turned me off.  (They still do, actually; if it was play, why were they necessary?) This time I read it all the way through and was happy to see that my 08/06/01 prediction after part one ...

<< Mike seems like a nice guy, so I hope he gets a chance to turn the tables or at least has a nice feminine experience, maybe decide to help the ladies voluntarilly when he hears their side. >>

... turned out to be true.  

I do wonder, though, how much of Mike's acceptance was real and how much was part of his initial programming.   If it was me in charge, and I wanted him eventually to end up as a happy  her, I would program the brainwashing to allow him  just enough reluctance to convince himself  that the brainwashing must have been removed and that he was indeed making his own choices - but of course he reallywouldn't be.  I wonder if Michelle will eventually "choose" to have SRS?

I have just finished this story it is a brilliant one the way it was laid out the writing is greaT what more can i add except that for this story you have a special great talent i would like to see more stories by you on this theme but very different  this is one of the best stories that i have read it was very well written explained and i for one enjoyed it immensly congratulation so far the of your sellection keep up the great work  many thanks  marks out of 100 iwould say 101 brilliant

 this story is
very intresting the way its set up i am enjoying this immenslely i will read more at a later date the first 2 chapters are well written& explained  tthe story will be great if it carries on inthe same context i would like to see an escape attept  maybe its in the next few parts well done i will comment further once i have read further

so far this story is really good i will read more at a later date the first 2 chapters are well written& explained  tthe story will be great if it carries on inthe same context i would like to see an escape attept  maybe its in the next few parts well done i will comment further once i have read further

i read all of the chaperts and it left me wanting more i was sad to see it end so soon i felt no i know this is one of the best stoires ive ever read

HI, i just waited till i read it all before commenting. i was a bit dubious at first, thinking it was just another forced fem story. (not really my cup of tea) but started to enjoy it more as it went on and the end has put it in the nicer categories of story's (of which i'm always in favour of lol) good work and i cant wait to see what you come up with next. huggles from prue.

Still curious where this is headed but Mike/Michelle is gaining some freedom within the framework the women have established.

I'm still uncertain where this is headed. Given his freedom, he stays. The chance to return to his education, he gives it up. Then mix in the bondage. At least Mary admitted she was wrong for the way he was treated.

This episode just left me confused.   Particularly the baby stuff at the end.  I can see that they are holding each other upright to keep any weight off of Micelle's back, but why the chains and padlocks?  All this bondage stuff is just weird.  I suppose the rationale is that they are forcing him to be introspective.  I don't know.  I wonder what Mary would have done if Mike had decided to leave?  I think it's too close to call whether she would have let him or not.

The difference between this and many other stories hasn't surfaced yet. He is being treated better than in many stories but still worse than it seems he deserves. He is changed and forced into a different life. Why? Because he dared to investagate. Hopefully the next part reveals the twist in the plot.

Just read part 2 and am a bit disappointed as it sounds like any of a dozen or more similar stories.  That is balanced by a "so far" from experience with your writing.  I still think Mike is a nice guy and doesn't deserve what's being done to him.  Michelle's happiness is all artificial right now, so doesn't count.  Oh well, life's not always fair.  Maybe Paul will recognize and rescue him as in "The Life and Death of Al Parker" that led to the Andersonville series???

I'm with Nellie, we never know what were going to get from you, Annie; that's what makes it exciting!  Again, I wish he'd resisted the pain more, made them work harder, or at least been able to shield a bit of himself mentally so "he" could come back later.  Mike seems like a nice guy, so I hope he gets a chance to turn the tables or at least has a nice feminine experience, maybe decide to help the ladies voluntarilly when he hears their side.  For all i know, though, you could have him in the middle of a dream or the object of an alien experiment or somesuch.  Oh well, just have to wait and see

If it wasn't Ann doing the writing, I'd pass this off as just another man into maid forced feminization story. But with this author any twist might work itself in. Hopefully, it won't follow the normal plot line and have Mike go though a lot of nastiness from a number of man hating women.