Its very nice story.love that ..
But hope that end could have been well deceissive.

I find that I can continue your beautiful stories in my wild and fruitful mind; I see no reason for you to "complete" them. I'd rather complete them myself.

not bad story. but why dont you finish the story? it see to me that all most of your storys are not finished. unlike most of yor storys with the woman free and easy at start and to get rid of her husband by to change sex. i can believe about there husband because if you realy love your partner then you do will do every thing to please her. but come on can you give them some backbone for once?

Well,  I've read the second part of the story,  Vicky T,  and I have to say it's well-written and the detail is believable......  My problem is that by the end of it we're too far down the gay man/ buttfucking/ cum swallowing/  transgendered boy/  kept woman thing that I'm confused as to why Carol wanted everything to go this far.  They were having a loving caring relationship that was released by Maddy's wild ideas..... Great!  That could have been enough and a beautiful relationship could have been found for them....  Too much "Because you wanted it" assumptions from Carol....  Too much "Well, if it keeps her happy" reactions from Carl.. to be believable in the second part.  Sorry - I'll re-read part one next time.  LOL WbG xx

I'd missed this story in all my wanderings through the Storysite site....  how could I have missed this!?   I've only read the first hal;f so far and confess to being frightened by the pace of developments - this Maddy is a nutter if you ask me....  Carl/Coral could have been allowed to arrive where he/she has reached by a much gentler speed......  but then that's the whole idea of the story - what one woman can plant in the mind of another..... and keep up the pressure to force change upon the other's husband....  I'd have loved it if they had communicated better.....  Too many assumptions about what Carl might or might not want.... But then,  again.. tha's the point....!!  IF ONLY WE COMMUNICATED BETTER WITH OUR WIVES!
lol WbG XXX

Absolutely beautiful. Lucky Coral!

I'm glad that the end showed that Carl wasn't totally stupid.

    A wonderful story.  The writing is so vivid that I can vision it so clearly .  I wish it could happen to me sometimes.  It certainly exites me tremendously.  Keep up the great stories.  Love from Stephanie.

Great story for me. I just love this style of writing. I'm sure that the author will continue to give us more.

The length of the story is what I enjoyed most because it gave me the ability to savor the changes in the character and I found Coral to be a well rounded out subject.

Diane