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Sarah Smile
by Kimberli Nicole McCarthy

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Comment by ANu on 12/02/10
Hi

Really enjoyed sara graduating into feminine ways.... want see her reaach destiny...


Comment by Kristi Love on 11/28/03
Been reading "Sarah Smile" etc., and can only say that they are wonderful stories and thoroughly enjoyable to read. I hope that you continue writing, and adding to this and the other wonderful stories.

Kristi

Comment by Andi Foster on 02/16/01
I really enjoyed Sarah Smile. It's well written and very sexy, with scenes of passion that are nicely differentiated and not simply repetitive. The disguise element when David dresses as Jasmine and the exhibitionism at the gas station were interesting features.

The only caveat I'd offer is that David eagerly adopted the role of she-male sex partner a bit quickly unless there was some previous gay relationship with Billy.

Best wishes, Andi.

Comment by Paula Jutras on 02/14/01
You go girlfriend. Excellent story.

Comment by Lisa Pagent on 02/14/01
Keep it up, Girlfriend!

Wow!



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