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Rosemarie
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Comment by this is me on 08/02/12
The mom has absolutely no culpability. The hypnosis is somewhat real however no therapist would make a permanent suggestion without written authorization from the subject. It is an ethical thing. Comment by No, sorry, NO! on 08/02/12 I don't care! It still is unjustified! They took it upon themselves to tell his mom!?! They took it upon themselves to contact the school about him!?! I don't care how you try to justify it it is forced and nonone is going to just take it. Comment by Silvia. on 09/15/11 All the frat boys, should be arrested transformed into women and sentenced to life imprisonment. Rodney's mother should be sentenced to life imprisonment as a man. Comment by Katie Jean on 03/01/11 I loved the storie very much. Comment by Polly on 08/19/09 True to Life story, or is it... a story, that is? Comment by Jenny on 06/21/09 Absolutely convincing; reads like the author has 'been there.' Comment by CATHY ANGELA DAVIS on 07/21/08 VERY SWEET STORY BUT BEING IN A FRAT I KNOW MOST FRAT BROTHERS WOULD HAD TO HAVE THE RIOT ACT READ TO THEM BY MARK TO ACCEPT ROSE MARIE IT WAS A KIND AND TENDER STORIES AND ONE OF THE BEST ON THIS SITE, I HATE THE VIOLENT ONES, I NEVER GOT TO LIVE MY DREAM AND TOO BAD THIS IS FICTION. I WISH I HAD A MOTHER WHO COULD OF UNDERSTOOD THAT IN ME. EVEN THOUGH SHE WAS A LADY SHE WOULD NEVER UNDERSTAND THAT. AND MY FATHER WAS ILLITERATE. SO GREAT STORIES THIS IS HOW THESE STORIES SHOULD BE NO VIOLENCE. PLEASE WRITE MORE LIKE THS ALMOST AS GOOD AS I AM, FOR EVERY WRITER THAT GETS PUBLISHED THERE IS A GREATER ONE THAT DOES NOT, SORRY ABOUT THE CAPS I FORGOT TO TURN THEM OFF BUT YOUR STORY IS GREAT. Comment by Janice Lynn on 07/02/07 Absolutely a sweet, fabulous story and very actually read as if it could be real. Using Hypnosis as a plot base was neat, as my Father was a Hypno-therapist so I know from experience what it can and can not do. Love your work, J-Lynn Comment by Vivien Britton on 05/10/05 Ohhh, if only my life would go in that direction! A very good story! Comment by Diane Sutton on 07/15/01 A fine story with the ending that everyone likes. A boy that is asked what his fondest and most secret desires are and then given the ability to forefill them. |
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