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The Rebirth
by Alyssa Davis

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Comment by Harshad on 10/23/12
BurnsI burned by right foot when I actlcendaily tripped into a campfire with bare feet.  By that night I had massive blisters about the size of bd lemons all over my foot and could not step on it.My wife set up turquoise light to shine on my foot all night long and I stuck my foot out of the covers, under the light, for over a week. The blisters went down in size every day.  Within a week the blisters had dried up and pealed off leaving fresh new skin underneath.  I never had any scarring.Ruben James

Comment by Marci on 07/16/11
Alyssa,
A well written romance.  It reads quite smoothly, and it warmed my heart instead of my loins.  A lovely transition presented in a very gracious manner.  I enjoyed it immensely, and will read your other stories in hopes of finding a similar quality of storytelling.

Comment by Silvia. on 04/08/11
Oh, Alyssa! Why did you stop writing?
We love your stories, please, don't stop.
We love you!
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Silvia. on 05/30/10
Hi Alyssa.
I re-read your story, and this is one of the best stories that I ever read.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Leia on 05/28/10
all of your stories are so well written, I love them all,.. but this "Rebirth" one is my favorite.
Thank you so much and please keep on writing.

Comment by Silvia. on 01/29/09
I'm very pleased and happy for read this story. You're a great writer.
Please, don't stop.
Kisses.
Silvia.


Comment by Aleesha on 10/28/08
You have a great giftin writing your stories and I hope you continue. Thanks.

Comment by k mixon on 05/31/08
This story is well done. It has a nice flow to it. The science of
it is believable. It has a innocence in how it unravels. I wonder
how many woman reading it are amazed at how it connects with
their true mental out look. I surmised from the begining that he
would lose something in the plane crash. The only thing that would
have brought true closure in the end,would have been a trip to the
doctor to complete her womanhood.

Comment by Vivien on 10/07/07
Wonderful, just wonderful this story is!  Will there be more added to this stoy? I sure do hope that you will take more time to add to it.


                    Vivie


Comment by dee on 09/14/07
A GREAT STORY AND I AM ENRICHED FOR HAVING READ IT

Comment by Justine on 09/19/06
The mark of a really good story : my mind keeps coming back to it since reading it ... a beautifully crafted fantasy

Comment by Tommie on 08/18/06
Hello, I have to say this is one of the most professional and pleasant stories I've ever read on a story site. My sincere admiration for a tale very well written. I can't wait to read other stories by such a talented author. Thank you very much. Sincerely, Tommie Bridges

Comment by Ginger on 12/29/04
Alyssa,
This is a sweet, beautiful tale that is well writtten. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and I look forward to reading your other stories.

Comment by Amber Lynn Kain on 09/20/03
Loved this story.  How many times have I day dreamed this almost exact storyline.  I would like to see Alyssa spend a little more time on the dressing part but the story flows beautifully.

Comment by Denise on 07/03/02
I have enjoyed this story and several of your other tales.

Comment by Teresia ( Terry) on 02/11/02
A wonderfull story, one that I would like to get caught in, long dresses and nighties.hmmmmmmmmmmm

Comment by Susan on 07/27/01
I liked your story a lot. Thanks for writing it.

Comment by kenneth phillips on 02/22/01
like it

Comment by Francesca on 01/14/01
I really loved this one, so romantic, I was really into it. I wondered about mixing the cattle food with bare hands as soon as it was mentioned but it did not detract from my enjoyment



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