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Pretty In Pink
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Comment by Rhiannon Sara Melton on 07/11/10
Yea I love it part two please. Comment by Patty on 03/16/10 A story most of us would love to have happen. I can feel the lovely self development, keep the story going Comment by Geena on 09/22/09 Kassie, Comment by ALISON MARY on 09/19/09 Kassie,a lovely story and I loved every word of it---you drew your characters so well and had the empathy to make one feel for them both. Comment by Lauren on 09/03/09 This story is excellent. Emotionally accurate in how people would feel and behave in such circumstances; nice details enough to seem real. I too hope you will continue their story. Comment by Abby on 06/11/09 The long lost daughter has come to stay. Delightful! Comment by Silvia (from Brazil) on 05/30/09 Great story. Don't stop writing, you're a good writer. Comment by Lee lee on 05/09/08 A gentle and loving story..a tad far fetched and too quick of an acceptance to be Sarah but I know it was not meant to be a novel. I always love stories where the 'guy' is sweetly led into a feminine life and treated as a girl Stories of forced fem are not for me. This one ended with what it should be a good bye to manhood and good morning to a regime of hormones and clothes and womanhood. Thanks for taking the time to make it sound so real L Comment by juliej on 08/18/07 a good story that i feel needs to be completed theire is so much more that can be added how thing went etc Comment by rone on 04/14/06 Well done,, lovely story,, very nice ending,, this is what makes dreams .... Thank you for shareing ...A must read for dreamers.. Comment by julie j on 08/19/04 excellent story another could work wonders well done i liked the way he agreed to everything stillsuprised at it still no choice in his position it looks like this will be a brand new life Comment by terie, somerset uk on 11/26/03 kassie i just loved your story you must go on with this one, its so beautiful.lots of inspiration & much love. Comment by Donna on 11/11/02 I loved every word - I think it was beautiful. Comment by Francesca Barrie on 05/23/01 Now this I loved! A beautiful, tender story with a hint of pathos. Well written in the first person it is too good not to have a sequel. Thank you. Comment by Diane Sutton on 03/19/01 Nice story, with well thought out story line. The story was done with just the proper amount of details to give the reader incentive to continue to read to the ending. |
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