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A Practical Joke Made This Boy Into A Happy Woman
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Comment by Lorelei on 05/01/15
I so much cherish traditional girls' field hockey uniforms of blouses, plaid kilts, and kneesox, and really dislike recent attempts at substituting boy-shorts for the kilts in an attempt to attract boys to teams, though some boys have been known to wear kilts when they play. I say, let's have co-ed teams if people want them, and let the boys wear shorts and the girls, kilts, so there's no squabbling. Voila, problem solved! Comment by rone welles on 02/17/12 Good story nice ending .. thank you for your time with this .. Comment by Aleesha on 04/26/10 I just love how a guy get frminised xo quickley. Comment by june on 05/26/08 not much backbone,all he had to say was linda you know i'm going to die when every body see's those pictures tomorrow.But so will you be for the sun go'es down,how do you want to go? fast or slow?or the pictures now...end of story... Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 04/26/05 I thouroughly enjoyed this story, as I am a sucker for happy endings. I liked the road less taken fact that Shari went back to being a boy at the end of the season and didn't dress again for several years. I liked the two mothers AND a father ending. I hope the baby's a lucky little girl. Comment by Nora-A on 04/26/01 I thoroughly enjoyed this little story and love the way he was able to turn it all around to make his life better. I also like the way you brought Amy in at the end to close the circle and bring some happiness to both of them |
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