I enjoyed this story - right up to the end.  The ending was so unfortunate.

I agree with what an earlier reviewer had to say on this story,
great beginning with a lot of potential for an enjoyable read.
But we were treated to another tragic tale where the poor TG
character ends up being a manipulated, used, sexually abused
and ravaged shemale prostitute! How's this for an ending, the
evil Doctor performs all the necessary surgical alterations on
Tim to make him/her a beautiful shemale! And through some
great detective work by Tina and her sister they're able to find
out where Tim is and she is rescued by the Authorites before
before she is shipped away to a life of misery and hell.

This is the pferect post for me to find at this time

I mean losers.
Silvia.

I don'tknow why the transgenders always  are the loosers.
why can't they be happy in the end of the story?
This isn't right.
Silvia.

I find it rather ugly and a powertrip.
Whenever I find this kind of storys it makes me wonder about the needs behind writing them.
In this case I'm glad I don't have to know.
Although it's well written it describes only manipulators and their victims.
Kind of sucks to me, there was a possibility of making this into something readable at the beginning but the Author lost out to his basest instincts.

Sorry but no cigar.

Yoron.

I really liked Picture Perfect. For me it just cries out for a sequel.

Gwen

So many times I start reading a story where I'd like to be a part of it. This one by Jacki is no different for me.

Jacki has a talent and she seems to only get better at as time passes.

I always enjoy reading this authors stories and like the detail and way she has for showing us how a great author works.

Your stories just get better and better and once again I feel there is scope for a sequel should you feel like it.