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cuDRRh Say, you got a nice article.Really looking forward to read more. Really Great.

Oc9upn Thanks again for the post. Much obliged.

Dana Gene chatted and checed your stories 4-9-04. Your writings aree as nice as your pics. Hope u remember. cant email, but wanted let u know. tnx

It was nice to have a man force our hero into a heroine for a change.

 It is a fact that the reader is hooked or otherwise at the start of the story; they need to identify the charcters in their minds and by choosing the female spelling of Sandi/Sandy & his mate, the oh so similar sounding Randy, you tended to confuse.
 Avoi this in futue and you wil do well - it was a good yarn by the way.

I was very disappointed in your story, mostly because in the beginning I had so much hope for it.  Here was Sandi, fighting back!  Not some weak little sissy submissive.  I was sure he was going to turn the tables and get that BASTARD false friend Randy.  People like Randy are EVIL, they are the paternalistic slave owners of the world; they are the fanatics who think they have the right to take away a person's right to pursuit of happiness in favor of giving him what they consider should be his happiness.  And to pretend to be a friend while doing it?  I'd feed HIM the damn potion!  Even at the alter, I expected Sandi to say "No, I'm Sandi and I don't!", smack him across the face (preferably with brass knuckles) tell the entire audience what Randy had done and give them the address so they could see for themselves,  and then walk out.  She might have to be a woman, but damned if she'd be HIS woman!
But you snatched defeat from the jaws of victory and let the bad guy win.   You made it just another Stepford Wives kind of TG story.  I'm sorry to be so critical, because the writing itself was good, but I hated to see something that started out new and different ending up as same old, same old.

Dana,
Your story about the perfect couple was very imaginative. The only thing that I would recommend is, if you have the time to correct a few of your spelling mistakes and some of the grammer it would make the reading of it much more enjoyable. I'm only telling you this because, the story is so well thought out that it deserves to be brought up to it's highest standards. I believe you have done an admirable job with writing this story. I hope you will continue writing. I know from my own experience that few people take the time to make comments even though they enjoy the story. That's why I'm leaving this message.
Please let us see more of your imagination come to life.

A wonderful titillating story with all the right ingredients, including a happy ending.I enjoyed every bit of it .Thanks