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Pamela's Pregnancy
by Janis Elizabeth

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Comment by Silvia   (from Brazil) on 02/10/09
For which Pamela does not it breast-feed the baby with her milk even?
You know she can do that, don't you?
But that is a lovely story anyway.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Molly on 07/27/08
Feeding formula is okay, but it would be better if the newborn baby were to suckle on mother's first milk: colostrum contains nutrients, growth factors, and immuno-globulins that are essential to an infant's health. Alternatively, the baby could be fed bovine colostrum (research indicates that it is better than human) if it is available, but why not just allow the baby to suckle for the first 48 hours?

Comment by Jennifer on 01/29/01
Karen and I went into the dining room. I carefully smoothed my gown under me as I sat. Karen sat to my immediate right. After the
    wine had been poured, Karen picked up her glass, looked at me and said, "Karen,

     "Pamela,

the last two years together have been wonderful.
    You are the kindest, sweetest, gentlest person in the world. Sitting there, you look as nice tonight in your wedding gown as you did
    two years ago. I love you." She then clinked her wineglass against mine while I blushed over her compliments.



:)


Comment by Nellie D on 01/27/01
A sweet story about a nice couple. An easy read with good descriptions and character developement.

Comment by Paula Jutras on 01/27/01
Truely sweet tale with good developement and character descriptions. It flowed real easy and kept short so that it was enjoyable for everyone to read. You really have a way of making people get into the story characters.



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