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Pamela: In The Beginning
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Comment by Cheyanne on 09/19/11
There's nothing like the reielf of finding what you're looking for. Comment by Aleesha on 03/19/09 This is the first story of yours I have read. I enjoyed it very much and will be on the lookout for more to read. Thanks. Comment by Lorelei on 09/20/08 Molly, Molly, dear...what is so "sad" and "melancholy" about the descriptions in this story as long as "Pamela's" participation is voluntary and willing? If monthly bleeding has been the most feminine act imaginable since Creation and the wearing of a napkin is an integral part of it, why not go "all the way"? Does anyone really believe that a female experiences one-twentieth of the cosmic magic, glow, and glory that a man has when wearing feminine intimates, when she puts on male boxers and britches? We need to lighten up and celebrate what we have. Comment by Molly on 07/29/08 There is a sadness and a melancholy that pervades this story (at least, it does to my sensibilities): the main character is living someone else's life, not his own. I picture someone who sacrificed his Selfhood to mom, who now sits alone at his computer at night after his work on the job (telecommuting) is done, and writes fantasies of fulfillment to post on the TG archives. Comment by Me on 07/29/08 The author writes: Comment by Molly on 07/29/08 Yes, the thing that puzzles me the most about Janis' stories is that a GG character always has her MtF characters wear sanitary napkins, "in case of accidents." I hadn't noticed that any of them are "proud to do it," only that they go along with it, whether they wore napkins before or not. Comment by Fancy Nancy on 08/01/06 Yes, the thing I love the most about Janis' stories is that her MTF characters are always wearing sanitary napkins, and proud to do it. I sure am. I want to feel clean and secure and supremely girly, and that's not a weakness. Comment by Susan Pauline Bauer on 05/23/04 Dear Janis, Comment by wendy on 05/20/01 I enjoy your stories very much. The one touch you always have is the wearing of a sanitary napkin. As a long time TV I have found that wearing a pad enhances the appearance of a feminine front. As a senior citizen I have a urinary problem, and as such wearing a pad or panty liner is standard dress for me these days, I also wear panties at all times, it helps hold the pad in place. I would like to see the wearing of a sanitray napkin more focal in your stories. Other than that I love them Comment by Nellie D on 03/19/01 A sweet sentamental story that covers his entire life. The writing is good with detail and description. |
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