oh my god indeed what a heck of a story things happing so fast and tyrying to keep up with it amazing a conflicy od bodies what a heck of a story its hard to describe how you feel without having to re read it all ahain but amazing story

After part V:  Great story!  The end reminded me of the ending to "The Man in the Iron Mask"  where the evil king is left in prison in the mask .  

One question.  Michelle was born a girl, masqueraded as Cris, a boy, and then in the end comes back to being Michelle again.  Is this correct, or is there one final secret?  There was a comment made that Cris was a good boy and Michelle woulfd be a good girl.  It was phrased in such a way as to lead the reader to believe Cris was born a boy.

Wounderfull story, from the first part to this last part 5 I have enjoyed reading your work. To see Cris turned into a girl by an operation that he never thought he would have or want but, by having an accident and then having his mother think his stories he was writing was what he really wanted is a great concept.

Your ability to tell a tale that keeps the interest of me and others it what we all strive for. Thank you for taking the time to write and post for us.

An intriguing story, not so much for its TG content as for its clever devious plot. I found it a little difficult to follow at first but this improved and it became a very good read.  Thank you

With part 5 added, this has turned out to be a very convoluted tale of action and reaction. Very interesting and good reading.

Michelle,
    Why didn't you tell us Tom Clancey was your proof reader?  Great story, just finished part 4.  Enough intrigue to keep all six James Bonds busy.

The twists and turns in this story make it most interesting. The writing, detail and character are better than average. Minor points of spelling and word use detract but the plot overcomes these.