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Comment by suba suba on 11/07/19
dginmw your site. You have some really great articles and I feel I would be a good asset. Comment by crorkz matz on 08/03/14 tGG0HY A round of applause for your article post.Thanks Again. Great. Comment by seo service on 09/06/13 lbmSng Muchos Gracias for your post. Want more. Comment by Silvia. on 06/17/12 Very bad. Comment by India on 05/19/11 That's the best aswner of all time! JMHO Comment by Bruce on 10/23/09 Too many yrs have passed, so its very unlikely this will be finished unless one of the people that submit story endings take over,, Besides most of whats left is the discovery of the pranksters and the revenge or actions taken against them and of course the final drop of our hapless hero(ine) into full Ashley mode Comment by paul on 09/26/08 please more for great story thanks Comment by Yoron on 06/02/08 So many words. Comment by Tera Bodehmos on 01/04/08 Wow! great story! Comment by suna on 02/18/06 Dont you people get it ? Story is over .. boy dead.. girl brainwashed new sex toy... finie Comment by poe on 10/01/05 Great story but please finish it soon. Comment by sawa on 11/07/04 great story but where is the conclusion !!!!!!!!! Comment by fregen on 10/07/03 This is why I love/hate serials. You start reading one like this that is soooo good and it hooks you. And because it's a serial it's long enough to really get into. But then when you're dying for the next episode it leaves you hanging!!! Please, please continue with the next chapter/s. The story is terrific, you are only getting positive responses, and really...isn't three years long enough to make us wait? Thank you for your writing and thank you for taking the effort to post it. Comment by DeeDee Clark on 09/05/03 Where oh where is chapter 4 and 5 and 6 and 7 and 8 and 9 and 10? Comment by Jake on 04/22/02 Great story. One of the finest I've read recently. What are you waiting for with part 4. If it's an invitation, you've got plenty of them here. I'll give you this; you're killing me with suspence. How does Thomas get revenge? Does he forget who he is? Do the Lt. and he have a relationship? I need to know if all hope is lost for this story. Comment by mermaidlover on 08/06/01 I loved this story,it has original elements in it. Comment by jimmy in white on 07/22/01 this is wonderful story of the transgender future of star trek & i'm hoping that part4 comes soon. afterall i would like to find out more abbout the raven & her crew. maybe the raven has some other stories in her future afterall why should scrambler be the only one writing about her? Comment by don on 05/02/01 fine story,very well written, i enjoyed it Comment by Rheno on 01/28/01 I like this story. It is one of the best stories i ever read. Itīs fantastic and i Hope for much more. Comment by Cathy_t_ on 01/23/01 Scrambler. I know I have commented on this story before, but having read it yet again, I felt compelled to re-iterate, WHATTA STORY!!!!! I have been waiting, VERY impatiently, for the next installment. HOP to it, Scrambler! lolololol. I love this story and I can't wait til you post the next part. Thanks a lot for this one. Fro those of you who haven't read this one yet, WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR???? This one could make it as a paperback, EASILY! Cathy_t_ Said that! Comment by Noel Lexicon on 12/16/00 ScramblerJ |
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