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This story begins with the main character being called before the tribal council of elders in shame to hear judgment pronounced over him: "Little Bear, you are a continuing embarrassment to the tribe as a brave and a warrior. All you seem to do is cause trouble and problems." We soon learn that his transgression is that he is not "manly" enough: "Your size has no bearing on this decision. Your lack of manly qualities and abilities is what caused you to be banished to live as a woman. Even now, you prove us right by standing there crying just like a woman. Now go with Little Deer and Pale Moon. They are ready to make you into a woman of the tribe."

I have to say that I appreciated having the premise of the story set out early, because of the time and trouble it saved me. Rather than write about my objections to this premise, I'll leave it as an exercise for the reader to do a web search on "berdache" and "two-spirit," and recommend in particular to the reader's attention the highly respected place (no shame) that "two-spirits" hold in tribal life. This is why authors of QUALITY fiction write about what they know and/or DO RESEARCH.

As always a great time reading Pretty Maid's tales of growing into a Beautiful woman in all ways.  I adore this saga and await more so I can live Pretty maid's life through these tales.  Well written and as usual this story is well edited.  Thank you betsygirl for you love, time and efforts.  Love Cor

I mega enjoyed this fifth adventure with Pretty Maid. I feel as I am growing more Womanly along with Pretty Maid. This Author is a personal Favorite of mine and continues to pull me into her delightful worlds. Thank you. The loving way betsygirl chronicles this serial is fresh and very sweet. I know many of the readers like the Forced Fem thoughts but I challenge them to deny the fact the would not want to be in this Talented writers hands and feel the expearences she pens. Thank you for the gift of your stories.

The growth of Pretty Maid continues to delight me, with this series you have greated a beautiful world and characters. Pretty Maid has become a very stong and intregal member of the Tribe and adore the fact she has accepted the work and joys of being a tribal female. I very interesting and well written twist into the life of Pretty Maid. Thank you so much for sharing her world with me and others. Look forward to seeing Pretty Maid's continual growth. Love Cordelia

Thank you for again bringing Pretty Maid into my life. An unexpected turn of events, well written and plotted out. This newest chapter of Pretty Maids shows the Author's flexibility and willingness to explore other facets in the ways of understanding womanly pleasures sans the sexual act. The more I read and become to know the Author, the Greater my respect grows from her wide variety of styles. This writer IS Many women in thoughts and spirit and I adore exploring her many sides. Thank you again. Love Cordelia.

nice and sweet tale well worth the time it took to read the saga.

Enchanted once again by the setting and the originality. I have shared the dream of the Author, but it was less serene and beautiful,Betsygirl captures the maidens heart (mine) with this continuing and beautiful series. Don't know if Sharon or betsygirl gets these comments, but a very pleased reader am I. Thank you Dear. Hugs Cordelia

Original and very entertaining. I loved the setting and the premise, I will await anxiously for more in this beautiful new world that you created. Superb details and adored the ending, felt like I was there. Thank you for the most enjoyable trip. Cordelia

a good first story. I don't think I ever read a indian TG story before.

Actually pretty good for a first time effort. The detail and descriptions were good. The crude remarks alluded to were unneeded and the sex act almost described well omitted.

Isnt a squaw another name for a loose woman in native American cultures? wouldnt a native american woman just be a woman or a wife?

well written story though top marks

Nice story for your first listing to StorySite. I would have liked it to be a little longer but you did manage to do a fine job with the length of it.
I look forward to another story from you.