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Odd Beginning/Happy Ending
by Mardee Louise Prynne

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Comment by Noah Vail on 01/19/10
Sweet, lyrical, romantic, with a shocking jolt of viciousness in the middle. The good guys clean up handily though, and the denouement plays out softly, elegantly, and happily.

Comment by Silvia     (from Brazil) on 10/16/09
Good story. I liked!
Keep writing.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Jamie on 05/19/08
Hey i thought 2 show u sum love. just finished ur story n im workn on Tool of Vengeance i like it alot. i love ur work ooh so very much inspirational (did i spell that right) well not that ull c this ne time soon  k love ya laters

Comment by Stefan on 02/18/03
I really enjoyed this story - beautiful and moving. Many thanks.

Comment by Trebor54 on 11/10/01
 I compliment you on a very good story. Write more with a good ending.



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