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zmB0YO Looking forward to reading more. Great post.Really looking forward to read more. Want more. Comment by suba suba on 10/26/19 lXcSsg Pretty! This was an incredibly wonderful article. Thanks for supplying this info. Comment by link building on 07/18/14 szHkgZ This is one awesome post.Really thank you! Cool. Comment by julie j on 03/28/10 its a great story now i have had a chance to rereadit the punishment to fit the crime brillant Comment by Jessy on 06/07/09 um wow ok this storie line is hust like the last one and personally don't feel bad about the next one becouse alot of people mess that up and that is no one would take that they would escap and bring hell down on everyone involved no matter what country Comment by julie j on 11/12/04 this is another story that is predictable i feel if it had been longer it would alo be better and that the things should have taken place over a period instead of rushed &all at once a spell in detention for example would have explained how he was caught and it was decided to teach him a leeson a sesson in detewntion dressed as a girl would have started of well then followed on throught the story untill the end a good try Comment by Eileen on 03/08/01 Really, this is pretty run of the mill and superficial. Looks like it was written in a half-hour or so. Characters are wooden. Characterizations are nonexistent and the plot is oh, so predictable. |
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