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The New Susan
by Sean McBride

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Comment by skipper on 05/11/04
hello, your story probably wasnt what i was hoping it would end up being. i got a little caught up in the beginning with the debbie character that i very much felt sorry for her in the end. i guess i character assosiated her with my own Mistress and got a little kick for doing that lol. i give you great praise for making me feel that way even if it was for a minor character. job very well done! =)
Comment by jennifer on 04/29/04
i really loved all the stories. wish i could be them, but i am married and wouldn't hurt my wife, but they were great. a closet crossdresser love xxxx
Comment by Gail on 04/21/02
This was life to die for. Keep up the good work, I loved it from start to finish. All I want to now was all this stuff in 1960 Owill thats life, Just a supper story Love from Gail..
Comment by dave on 02/09/02
Very good.

I have read lots of the stories on this site and yours is one of the few that made me laugh at the end.
I know what the previous comment about the transformation coming too quickly was all about - but that was necessary to deliver the punch line.
Comment by Diane Sutton on 11/08/01
Good story, with some very nice touches. I think the transformation came a little too quickly but, due to it's length it was done quite nicely.


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