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The New Secretary
by Sarah Jones

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Comment by Aleesha on 07/30/10
I agree with Lee Lee that your story was too short. You could have explored many twists to your story, bonding it and making it more pleasureable.

Comment by lee  lee on 07/30/08
Much too short  a tantalizing beginning but all of it could have been in one paragraph and that would leave plenty of space to describe how far he had gotten with his hormone treatments or/ and a reasonable explaination of how he fell so quickly under the spell of his new boss..Still it was a  pleasant read and I am often turned on by long trench coats on miniskirted femaless    Tell us more Ok?

Comment by Mardee Louise Prynne on 05/17/02
The descriptions of the hero(ine) dressing were wonderfully written.  I felt myself donning the items as I read.
Very nice treatment of an always fascinating theme.

Comment by Jennifer on 08/02/01
A little jerky, but gives it a dream-like feel.  And what a DREAM!

Sure is how I would love to end a week!


Comment by Paula Jutras on 07/31/01
always in for a good secretary story. Though personally I perfer the magicial boss and worker body swap type. Yours wasn't too bad after a bad day of work.



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