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A New Life Begins
by Patricia Anne Anderson

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Comment by Silvia    (from Brazil) on 02/01/10
I liked! Good job. Well done.
Silvia.

Comment by Madge on 06/23/09
cute story

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 10/09/04
Cute story, but I thought the boyfriend/sex was unrealistic and unnecessary, and Alex seemed like a real jerk with his hands all over her having just met her, especially knowing she was brand new at girlhood and wasn't experienced dealing with guys (part 1)  He certainly was no gentleman.  

Never mind the gender change and that Patricia is brand new at being in a boy/girl relationship,  even if she were a GG, would any mom be OK with the fact that her 14/15 year old daughter gave a guy a blow job on only the second date?  Sis says she did it at that age, but I bet she didn't tell mom.


Comment by Paul on 12/17/00
A new Life begins is a good story and I love how helpful the mother was. Wish more parents could be so supportive.



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