I really enjoyed this story.  Turning a woman into a flexible, flattened skin really turns me on.

I also read and enjoyed Replacement Manniquin 5, where the husband and wife take turns flattening each other, and she pretends to be a cardboard cutout at a video store.  Public display of helpless, transformed people is another big turn-on for me.

I have a suggestion for you: could you please slow down the story a bit, and describe in detail what is happening, what the characters are feeling and thinking, and what they look like?  The pace of the story seems frantic, and they could be more erotic with better descriptions of the setting and happenings.

Technically your writing is easy to read; the words flow and the character speech is natual sounding.  The spelling is good, but you should be careful with homonyms, which are words that sound the same but are spelled differently and have different meanings.  I found several instances of this type of error.

Overall, I rank you as a better than average writer.  You have a very active imagination, which goes a very long way.  Many people cannot imagine the things you come up with.  Just watch out for the homonyms, and slow down the story pace and describe everything more fully.

I appreciate your efforts very much.

Respectfully,
Alan

A refreshing story, most enjoyable.a step up in my opinion although i'm curious u said she was admiring someones 10in shoes was that the height of it or the length. ten inch high platforms? ay way apart from that i enjoyed it. keep it up  huggles from prue

A interesting fantasy.  You must have a very active imagination to keep coming up with ideas like this one. Please keep sharing them!