What the f*ck
Of his own making??
Meaning he wanted it himself?

So every rape victim is the perpetrator then?
Give me a break, will'ya.

This story truly stinks, as does the intentions and dreams behind it.

Yoron.

Just read this drivel. Another in the stupid, pathetic man and nasty, selfish woman stories. The only dubious distinction this one has is its length which means it's extra annoying. You keep hoping that the worm will turn and that the author might take pity on the poor slob but no such luck. I hope that's the last part, it's certainly the last of this that I will read.

I just re-read this after 2+ years.  I stand by my previous comments.  Well written, but what a sad, sad story of a sad, sad life of his own making.  

Sarah,

What a wonderful story. I wonder how many of us readers would give up everything to be "little lace collar girl"? This might be the best story on the site IMHO. Its been awhile since you've written I hope you give us something new soon.

Wow! What a provocative story. The transition from able guy to helpless almost-girl was handled beautifully and with insight. One senses a real slippage in the protagnoist's self-image over time, and his own surprise at his situation and inability to break out of it add a much welcome realistic feeling.

I would have loved to learn more about Nelle. She was just too enigmatic to be truly satisfying. I mean, what does she get out of it? Why, for example, was she willing to abandon her apparenlty robust sex life just to have a live-in toy? One senses that she will inevitably have to become bored with her creation.

But that's not a major complaint and in light of the wonderful job you did with the narrative and the heroine's psychology, I can only thank you for this great effort.

I read all six parts at once.  When I read the chapter descriptions, I was excited.  Finally a story where a girlfriend would realize she'd gone too far and have to earn back the respect and trust of her friend.  Sure, I thought he would remain a she, but probably a lady, with the two becoming equal girlfriends after the original girlfriend had earned her friend's trust back.  The story is very well written and easy to read, but imagine my surprise when I found him, after all she had done to him, talking about earning HER trust back!  Damn.

This is the best story I have ever read.  Believe it or not that has been my fantasy for years.  I am a closet crossdresser, I own 5 pairs of pants that have a zipper and button closure in the back and 4 blouses that have back button closure aswell.  When I read this story I became more and more excited. I dreamed that was me being dressed like that. I wish there were more stories written aswell as this story.  Al stories are about lingerie and maids outfits.  Dressing like a business women is the best.  I hope you continue to write stories about men being dressed in womens pant suits.  I will be looking foward to more stories like this.  Keep up the get work.

Please email me with you response. :)

Okay, this has gotta be a tease. It's better than the last part, but still, you GOTTA get him into a skirt or dress and enjoying it! Pantsuits may be practical, but no secretary looks their best in anything but a dress, skirt or skirtsuit!

I hate to say it but Part 3 was weaker than the first two parts. For one thing he never winds up in dresses, and the focus starts to unravel.

I really enjoyed both parts of this story.  The only thing that doesn't seem to fit is the sudden "mommy" business.  Maybe this will be resolved in the next part but it's kind of incongruous in this narrative as it jumps out of nowhere.   Also, it seems kind of weird that in a business office like the one I work at in real life, a white blouse and gingham overalls would be considered appropriate dress, even in a casual atmosphere.  His duties are also not as delineated as they need to be.  These are not meant as "digs," just points that to me anyway, need clarification.

Part 2 is as good as Part 1.  Can hardly wait for the conclusion...

I concur with Axanar but one question.  What's the business what's the protagonist's position in it?  Does he own it?  Otherwise it's wonderful and looks to be a good 'un!

This is one fantastic start.  Please don't wait too long to give us the rest!  It's as good an office femdom piece as I've ever seen!