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Comment by Wannaabe Ginger on 05/23/19
"Joe sat at the dressing table for twenty minutes looking at nothing. For him, it was the same old story. The joy and excitement of the preparation, the sensuous feel of the nylons and panties on his smooth skin. The erotic joy of the scents and feel of the cosmetic creams, lotions and sticks as they slid across his face. It was all shattered by one careless glance in the mirror. You see, the person staring back at Joe was the person he was and not who he wanted to be." Comment by Angie on 06/10/16 Marti, thanks so much for this story. I would swear you peeked into my mind and created Joe/Sue. There is so much about him/her that I hold in common. Joe's struggle to find balance and blend with his inner woman was masterfully developed and parallels my journey very closely. Even Karen parallels my wife's journey into not just accepting but celebrating my femininity. Again, thank you! Comment by smashing top seo on 10/25/13 jZVehv Very informative article post.Really looking forward to read more. Really Cool. Comment by viagra on 02/13/12 Sometimes I also see something like this, but earlier I didn't pay much attention to this!.... Comment by How to get free followers on 02/13/12 Sent the first post, but it wasn't published. I am writing the second. It's me, the African tourist.. Comment by cheapostay discount on 02/13/12 Not bad post, but a lot of extra !!.... Comment by esalerugs coupons on 02/13/12 As usual, the webmaster posted correctly..!! Comment by buy cheap oem software on 02/12/12 9WDcXI Edidn't think about that. I'll tell my mother, she won't believe it..! Comment by Silvia. on 11/03/09 Good story, I liked! Comment by WannabeGinger on 05/31/07 Marti, you've got a certain style that hits my buttons - I love the themes and the detail you use....... Indulges my hair fetsih beautifully. Could you write another chapter... maybe it's been too long, but do try! Love Ginger Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 10/17/03 Marti! I am impressed. Insightful, engaging, uplifting, creative, and really sweet too. I too test in the category of androgyny and that was very interesting for me. But more importantly, I feel that your whole reasoned approach to conflict and resolution is far more realistic than most any story I have read. What a strong love with such dedication and devotion. Admiration abounds for Karen and her ability to be flexible and loving toward her dear Joe/Sue. Her initiation of the whole counseling discovery process surely puts her in the TG fiction hall of fame. I think the realistic guilt and how to address that is helpful too for those who struggle with that. God knows I have in the past. This story could be for some or many much more than a story but part of an education to understand themselves. I am sure you intended that. Above all else I really enjoyed your tale. Thank you so very much. Comment by TinaTVuk on 11/16/01 Just to say very pleased that you have got back to this story. It is a very well written saga and has me tingling in all the right places. I feel like I genuinely want Janet/ Sue/Joe to get back with Karen and work things out - it will also be interesting to find out how Sue feels about kissing a man (and especially her brother - not sure about that) - will/won't she tell Karen - how will he cope with permed hair at work, will she and he co-exist, what role will Karen play - hope to hear the conclusion soon... Comment by Billiesue on 02/26/01 grate story but need more how about part 4 Comment by paul jutras on 12/25/00 A story that made one cry and feel warm inside at the same time. I love the movie you mentioned near the end. (SIMPLY IRRISIBLE) and I love the closness mentioned at the end of the story. Comment by Becky on 12/03/00 Hi Marti Comment by Pickles on 12/01/00 Dear Marti Comment by Jan Brown on 11/30/00 I really liked this story and wish there will be add'l parts. Comment by Alyssa Davis on 11/29/00 An excellent story so far..... Comment by Nellie D on 11/29/00 The first part of an interesting story. Good developement and writing. It sounds like the inner conflict that all of us endure whether TG/TV or not. Comment by Laura Brooks on 11/29/00 This looks like it's going to be another nice story by Marti. I like the way the characters are unfolding, the plot is developing nicely and I'm really looking forward to future installments. Comment by Emmie Dee on 11/29/00 Very moving story, with psychological depth and honesty. Thank you! |
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