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The Nanny
by Alyssa Davis

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Comment by Silvia. on 05/30/10
Good story, I liked!
Silvia.

Comment by Susana on 01/13/10
A very sweet, happy story. I loved it!

Comment by Aleesha on 10/30/08
Yet another great story. I would have loved to of had that experience as a younger person. Thanks.

Aleesha


Comment by john on 06/09/08
another nice one. Keep them acoming.

Comment by Mandee on 02/11/08
Dear Alyssa,
  I don't believe you will ever read this comment but I feel so moved to tell you how much I loved this excellently written story  which is so truly expressive of true transgender feminine feelings and wishes.  To be offerred a life of being female- in a motherly role with a child- by a woman who puts her utmost trust in you is just so extraordinary an experience for those of us in the T- community.  Thank you for writing it.   The only thing I would change is the fact of the boy wanting to be a girl because of never having male role modeling and Terri and his Mom in complicity to make it happen.   I don't feel right about that at all.
However the other parts of the story are wonderful.
Hugs
Mandee

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 09/21/05
Since terry lived as a woman and din't want male sex, I would think he would eventually do HRT and SRS.

Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 08/03/04
Dear Alyssa:

    Fun, lighthearted and very enjoyable. It could be expanded quite a bit but short stories are nice too. I admire the tone and immensely appreciate the enjoyment Terry has in dressing and taking on the woman's role. This is good stuff. Thanks again for another good story.

Hugs,

Kristi

Comment by AV. on 05/21/02
A good story!

Comment by Teresa ( Terry ) on 02/16/02
an excellent story, my only regret is that I"m not in that position, as the nanny.

Comment by Francesca on 01/14/01
Yet another excelent story from an author who is fast becoming one of my favourites. I really empathised with the hero(ine).The stuff of dreams.



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