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Mystery Date
by Marnie Smith

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Comment by Missy Susan Pauline on 01/16/11
Dear Miss Marnie,

I enjoyed your cute story. Family love and trust should come first. I've got grand-daughters, that are James' age. It's nice to read a story where nothing is either forced or enforced.

Now it's time to read your other stories.

Missy Susan


Comment by Silvia. on 11/03/09
If I was a man I wouldn't do it, I wouldn't dress like a woman.
Silvia.

Comment by Denise Em on 03/13/07
Marnie,

  I dearly love this story.  The "hero" only makes a salutary venture into femme-land, and returns no worse for the experience - and likely better for it.  Moreover - although this isn't a "stuck" story - in a nice way he is, isn't he?  

  I hope someday we'll see more about James and his Halloween adventure.

Deni



Comment by Matthew on 12/01/05
Hey Why not it sounds like it would be fun next Halloween.

Comment by Julie on 07/29/05
another cute story, and don't we all wish we had sisters like that?  It could have used more detail, especially with his transformation.

Comment by Geraldine on 03/03/03
I thought this a sweet, wonderful story of living in a female household. I would love to read the sequel.

Comment by G on 09/03/01
You've got to write the sequal to this story. About how his wife dresses him up in her skirts or dresses.

Comment by Nellie D on 03/15/01
A sweet story of a practicle joke played on the blind date of his sister. This well written story has good detail and description.

Will we learn of his experiences at the Halloween Party?

Comment by emmie dee on 03/15/01
A charming, innocent little story, nicely told!



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