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My Sister and Me
by Patricia Anne Anderson

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Comment by Aleesha on 08/17/10
I was amazed how you depicted Patricia's parents tb so accepting of her change. I would have liked to have read part 2.

Comment by Silvia. on 02/01/10
Bad story.
Silvia.

Comment by julie on 04/18/03
an interesting story I was quite suprised that pat agreed so readily and how calm his father was a bit more touching up but a good story I will read part 2 and make further commment

Comment by Jean Camille on 03/27/02
Hello Patricia:
I discovered your story, and enjoyed it.  I like the unique theme and
hope that you continue to develop further your ideas about gender
adaption to change. The sex was not overly gratuitous,and seemed realistic to todays attitudes. Please continue your writing about gender change and thereby help to inform those of us with such concerns.
All my love
Jean Camille

Comment by Diane Sutton on 03/27/02
Just why no one else has taken the time to write a reader comment is beyond me. This is a lovely story and I totally enjoyed the way the plot line and writing style were done.

Diane



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