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My Self, The Alien
by Ann O'Nonymous

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Comment by Mark on 05/17/11
I really liked the story. The ending was just beautiful.

Comment by Silvia. on 08/28/10
Hi Ann.
Good story, I liked it!

Comment by DEE on 09/20/07

Comment by Allison R. Makkonen on 06/29/07
I was surprised to see your story on this site for a couple of reasons. First is I am from Roswell, NM and am exposed to the alien life daily. Second is I am also a full time transitoning transwoman.
So for the story itself, I tried to relate it to our community and unfortunately not convincing enough. Not being critical, it was a cute story, just if you write about somewhere try to be a little more convincing. Good luck with future stories, if you would like a lay of the land for future stories please feel free to contact me.
I am also a ts writer and have had two books published, first Allison in Wonderland and second one was The Seductress.

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