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My First Years
by Nadia Cook

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Comment by jake jilennanal on 05/15/17
eeZYxH send this information to him. Pretty sure he all have a very good

Comment by jenn on 08/11/12
i must start out by saying this is a lovely story. i first read it after i starter chatting with the author at mrs-silks site.  but after chatting with "nadia" over a period of two years, the story is definitely not true.  nadia changes her story like she changes her panties.  for the longest time she was being feminized by her wife, but when i approached her using a different name, her story changed completely.

i do love the manner in which it is written, and it is oh-so stimulating, if you know what i mean.


Comment by Molly on 07/23/08
It interests me that there are no complaints among the other comments here about the stream of consciousness writing style and lack of paragraphing. In this case, it strangely enhances the mood of the story, such that it definitely feels like it is an eleven-year-old child who is narrating it.

This story has some dark stuff in it, the beginnings of the Femdom/ Authoritarian angle for which the sequel is categorized. Though the main character and narrator clearly enjoys and goes along with his sister's "petticoat punishment," the darker aspects show when she takes the money their father gave her to buy him camping gear, takes him to buy girly clothes with it instead, and threatens to tell their father that her brother asked for the clothes instead of the camping gear if her brother complains to him. The part that disturbs me most, though, is that she teaches him to masturbate, and to lick it up afterwards. I guess I will have to read the sequel to see where she took that, but I smell bad intent, and some abuse coming.

The thing that strikes me hardest is that this (purportedly true) story exemplifies the fact that all those ever-popular forced femme stories on the archives are not just fantasies, but have a real basis in experience. To my mind, that which forces people to become what they are not, is abuse.


Comment by juliej on 11/04/06
an intresting story well described &written it was also an intersting point that his mother had given sister the autheity to do anything what a way to go

Comment by Nadia Cook on 08/04/02
Im an Australian girl called Nadia Cook.
Was this a random name or was it an actual incident?
Can the writer please get in touch by email soon
I would really like to hear from you as soon as possible.

Comment by Diane Sutton on 12/05/01
A very sweet story that I totally enjoyed reading. The format was good and the spelling and grammar were fine for  a first story. Well, worth the time I spent reading this story. Highly recommended.

Comment by Patti on 11/22/00
    Great story.  Give us more.  Especially liked the part of Linda in jeans, while you were in skirts!

Comment by Jobbi on 11/22/00
Wery entertaining.  Good.  Give us moore.

Comment by Dave on 11/21/00
Great story! I really liked it alot. Made mr feel like a kid again!



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