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My First Years
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Comment by jake jilennanal on 05/15/17
eeZYxH send this information to him. Pretty sure he all have a very good Comment by jenn on 08/11/12 i must start out by saying this is a lovely story. i first read it after i starter chatting with the author at mrs-silks site. but after chatting with "nadia" over a period of two years, the story is definitely not true. nadia changes her story like she changes her panties. for the longest time she was being feminized by her wife, but when i approached her using a different name, her story changed completely. Comment by Molly on 07/23/08 It interests me that there are no complaints among the other comments here about the stream of consciousness writing style and lack of paragraphing. In this case, it strangely enhances the mood of the story, such that it definitely feels like it is an eleven-year-old child who is narrating it. Comment by juliej on 11/04/06 an intresting story well described &written it was also an intersting point that his mother had given sister the autheity to do anything what a way to go Comment by Nadia Cook on 08/04/02 Im an Australian girl called Nadia Cook. Comment by Diane Sutton on 12/05/01 A very sweet story that I totally enjoyed reading. The format was good and the spelling and grammar were fine for a first story. Well, worth the time I spent reading this story. Highly recommended. Comment by Patti on 11/22/00 Great story. Give us more. Especially liked the part of Linda in jeans, while you were in skirts! Comment by Jobbi on 11/22/00 Wery entertaining. Good. Give us moore. Comment by Dave on 11/21/00 Great story! I really liked it alot. Made mr feel like a kid again! |
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