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Mother's Daughter
by Dee

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Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 09/19/07
I just reread this and agree with my earlier assessment; Beth is evil. Beth turns Dave, without his consent into a girl so that eventually she/he can become her lesbian love slave who she sadistically forces to remember who she was from time to time. Yet in the beginning you write about Beth:

<< The one item she had held back from Shawna though was the fact that she was a wicca - a witch -, who had been trying to keep her powers a secret so as not to cause any one individual harm. >>

Seems she wasn't trying very hard - so much for wiccan morality


Comment by dee on 08/29/07
the stotyis hot,but the good tgirl needs her revenge

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 12/15/01
Aunt Beth is Evil.  So far, the Bad Guys win again.  Since you say there is more to come, Why not do something interesting and have Dave come back and turn the tables on Aunt Beth and on Mommy and Daddy.

Comment by Sissy Piscilla Valentine on 09/25/01
Very hot story but think a little more detail, like in the first scene with Tina would help  Look forward to upcumming chapters.  Know where I can find an Aunt Beth?  <<<giggle!>>

Sissy Prissy

Comment by Rachel Anne on 07/05/01
I read this story and thorughly enjoyed it. Can''t wait forthe next part.  Keep up the good work.



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