i stopped reading where she was getting ready for her date with someone other than her husband!! open marriages don't work!! if she wants to cheat just get divorced so he can find someone to love & trust to help him with his dressing or do it privately so he does'nt have to deal with a broken heart when she finds another man she wants to stay with!!!

tXF6iJ This really answered my drawback, thank you!

Personally I found the story to be boring and exhibiting a complete lack of imagination.  The story's theme is so old and worn out it reminds me of a pair of cotton panties that have been washed one time too many.
 The character development is weak.  It's three or four paragraphs before the reader learns the wife's name although she is central to the story as the antagonist.  "Loni" who is the main character's alter-ego is introduced midway through but not identified till the end of the story.  Too often writers feel compelled to describe the physical attributes of their characters, "she's 5'8" tall and wonderfully built while I'm a 5'10" bean pole...", implying, of course, that he can fit into her clothes easily.  The truth is that if a crossdresser wants to dress, he'll find a way whether the clothes fit perfectly or not.
 Finally the writer needs to trust his readers imagination.  Somethings merely need a suggestion, not a full description.  The suggestion will trigger the reader's imagination and that imagination  will fill in the blanks allowing he or she to make the story more personal.

more more more - - - - - -  -

There just has to me more - - - right??

i think sabay don't understand about comemnt, why why  delete some comemnt for who say not good or good? the first im say stupid u23, delete stupid , and see only u23

Yes, another story that gave me an erection which it the highest complement I can give. The last few paragraphs were the best, him going out to get lucky.

This is one of the worst stories I ever read!
Ridiculous.

love the story,i wish you had told more,,,like what happend when you were out at the clubs did your husband/gurl friend get picked up by a guy and mabey have some hot fun ,,you can tell in the story that that is what you and he wanted to happen,,,and i think it is great,,,,when my wife was alive we had a open life style ,,,i am a sissy cross dresser (bi)and i understand ,,,wish i could find another woman like my first wife,,,it was great ,,,,,,,again great story ,,just would like to know more of what happen.,,,be happy,,,i wish you both the best in life....

Now there is a wife dear to a gurly heart! lucky Loni now too bad its not Lucky Deanna!

Ok lets get this one on the road to some more excitement!!

Hot story. A little let down, I was really set up for the big bang, but it was fun to supply my own ending also.

need the rest of the story.loved it so far.what a wonderful wife.more!

Hi- I love this story because it shows people really being honest with one another and going with the flow.   I would have had Charlie offerring his cock for a quickie blow job with the wife encouraging and enjoying the show.  Then they could go out and of course it would be a set up with one of Charlie's friends waiting for them to return to the club- because while hubby was doing Charlie- she slipped out of the room and called the friend that all was in the works for their return.  He would pretend to be a loose guy at the club and would come over seeing a single woman- and.... well I am sure you know.  Love to see and continuation honey.  Thank you for the story even unfinished
Emmy

good story but too short needs to be longer

not bad, but left me hanging.

I am inclined to agree with other comments the story is interesting that linda knew about don but did nothing until the fateful night it needs to be more explanatary and it does need a second part to finish it properly

Nice well writen the ending left you?

Why end a story half done, indeed. I found the open ended ending quite interesting. In fact it was very realistic. We women know how we place things in our drawers and closets and when we are done wearing them, put them back in the same order. Most husbands, or boyfriends for that matter, when they DO wear our things, are so caught up in the excitement they forget where they got them and how they were folded or hung up. This was a very good story. Keep writing.

Barb

Why end a story falf done?????