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The Mole
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Comment by Gaylord on 10/26/12
Cait, you're great.Love you lots. Keep up the good work and you can do whatever you want.Grampa Buzz loves you too. Comment by Silvia. on 06/01/10 Good story Alyssa. I liked it! Comment by Daniel on 05/28/07 A really good dtory, I enjoyed it a lot. Comment by Johanna on 12/13/05 Great story, well written! Comment by Angel O'Hare on 03/26/03 Giggle, what a fun read! Two authors and you can tell who wrote what. Alyssa has the matter of fact style with little emotion, but very detailed. Caitlin has the emotion and fun style in her writing. You make a great team! Comment by Jane Hudson on 02/21/03 Great top story loved it Keep up the very good work Comment by Carolyn Baxter on 02/08/02 Great story particularly since I share the police perspective. Ve4y erotic and stimulatin. Thank you Comment by Catherine on 03/07/01 Great story, I enjoyed ot from begining to end Comment by Catherine on 03/07/01 Great story, I enjoyed ot from begining to end Comment by Jamie Elizabeth Burgess on 12/21/00 I thoroughly enjoyed "The Mole". One of my complaints about most gender-crossing stories is the lack of believability in the plot. I'm interested in showing the positive aspects this phenomena to society. Most of this story seems plausable except maybe the forced cosmetics operation (in Las Vegas ?) and the source of the stolen goods (WWII was a long time ago). Comment by Emmie Dee on 12/09/00 A fascinating, exciting story with good characters--a great read! Comment by Nellie D on 12/09/00 A very good story that has the lead character exploring his feelings as he is forced to dress by his sense of duty. One or two odd twists. Comment by paul jutras on 12/09/00 makes me think of more than one caption image that I saw and enjoy on Jenny's TG site. |
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