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Milady's Wiles
by Brandy Dewinter

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Comment by Silvia. on 05/09/11
Hi Brandy.
Wonderful, great, and amazing story.
GOD save the princess forever!
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Vivien on 07/17/10
What a wonderful story!  I usually do not care for stories pertaining to old kingdoms but this one took my heart and captivated me until the very end.
Yes, the power of women can be very intimidating indeed! :}

Comment by Bruce on 08/06/09
thank you for a truely great story and done with a very deft touch

Comment by Wraith on 07/29/09
Awesome storytelling!

Definitely an outstanding work.

This is the third time, I enjoyed this piece of mastery.

It's worthy for an adaption to the big screen.


Comment by Rosemary Langton on 05/02/05
I thoroughly enjoyed the story and hasd great difficulty in turning off my computer when I found it' even though the time was well past midnight. The characters were believable and although there was a certain amount of death and mahem the main characters were not subject to humiliation Thank you for your efforts Rosemary

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 06/15/04
SEQUEL !!!!  Please.

Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 12/08/03
Of course Milady's Wiles was fabulous as you wrote it Brandy.  An excellent and perceptive presentation of a divided mind.  Cherysse is so powerful as to take over Deacon and yet Deacon is still there. All is so convincing as to not ever require much suspension of disbelief.  Excellent grammar, syntax, mechanics, and descriptive language as usual. I love most all of your work but this ranks up there very high. Why not publish it in the open market?  Thanks again and I very highly recommend this tale. It was a joy to read.

Hugs,

Kristi  

Comment by Another Brian on 12/08/03
Wow! Way to go!
Brandie, it doesnt matter when you wrote this story; it is great!
This is from someone who tends to avoide fantasy and "Knights of olde". Once I started I could not put it down. You have done a great job and I thank the "this date in history" option for bringing this story to my attention. Those who have not yet read it should try an open mind. Thanks again
Another Brian

Comment by Rose2 on 07/11/01
    A truely epic story, grand characters and encreadible writing.  One more story not to be missed.

Comment by Paula Jutras on 06/14/01
Plot reminds me a bit of the Transgendered comic PRINCESS PRINCE by CPM COMICS. Enjoyed the tale though.

Comment by emmie dee on 06/14/01
As I read Milady's Wiles on Brandy's site, I became enchanted. Although in a time and setting very unlike our own, the characters, though a bit bigger-than-life, are engaging and real. I found myself passionately caring for them. Two painted thumbnails up!



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