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Comment by Silvia. on 09/09/10
DISGUSTING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Comment by juliej on 04/06/07 to short not enought to make a good story how did it all begin what was the cause of it what was his reaction to being forced to wear girls clothes Comment by kim on 02/16/07 Decent writing. Wanted more brutal details, but for a nice short forced fem story, this was tight and excellent. Comment by Rone Welles on 11/08/06 The making of a serial killer ... this may have happened at one time .. I hope not all mothers are not the same ,this one didn,t love anybody ... Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 09/15/05 Two questions upon re-reading this story after 4 years. Comment by jasmine on 06/16/05 i reread this and it upset me as much as before and i cried. im asumming the mother absolutly hates her son. she wants him to hurt and suffer and she did that alot. Comment by julie j on 03/04/05 this is a sad story but a gain a better start would make more enjoyable something explaiining how he got into this predicment in the first place it was intrsting but i feel more could have been done with it Comment by jasmine on 01/27/05 well. no one has posted a commen in 4 years. like this story isnt worth it. Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 07/18/01 Well, you did it again! Just 5k and my blood is boiling and my mind is exploding with unanswered questions that I'll probably have to use my own immagination to answer. Damn you're good! The one unusual thing, I guess is what the mother being in "the guard position" means. Just one of the things I'm imagining is this wedding taking place in a mental institution where the court has placed her mixed up son. The groom is big enough to protect him against the other inmates. Mom has, under an assumed name, gotten a guard job to continue her hold over him. She manipulated him into the wedding, of course. Comment by Trebor54 on 07/18/01 I'd like to see the mother get hers in a sequel. Your a very good writer, but I would like to see some revenge storys on the perpetrators. Comment by Nellie D on 07/17/01 I can only hope that this hasn't happened to anyone. The actions of the mother are totally unforgivable. In my mind, she is a confirmed man hater bent on destroying her child. Her actions are cruel and self serving. |
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