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Memories
by Ann O'Nonymous

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Comment by Silvia. on 09/09/10
DISGUSTING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Silvia.

Comment by juliej on 04/06/07
to short not enought to make a good story how did it all begin what was the cause of it what was his reaction to being forced to wear girls clothes

Comment by kim on 02/16/07
Decent writing. Wanted more brutal details, but for a nice short forced fem story, this was tight and excellent.

Comment by Rone Welles on 11/08/06
 The making of a serial killer ...  this may have happened at one time .. I hope not all mothers are not the same ,this one didn,t love anybody ...

thought provocking   thank you  Rone ..


Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 09/15/05
Two questions upon re-reading this story after 4 years.

1)  What happened to his mom when he was thirteen?  He apparantly was allowed to be a normal boy up till then.  At that point his mom decides to feminize him, and, not, apparantly because she thinks it will benefit him; the sprained ankle scene shows she doesn't care about him.  

2)  If he still hates it, why, as an adult, is he still putting up with it to the extent of marrying a man?  

Comment by jasmine on 06/16/05
i reread this and it upset me as much as before and i cried. im asumming the mother absolutly hates her son. she wants him to hurt and suffer and she did that alot.
in a marrage i can imagin he will be anything but happy. she doesnt want him to be with a girl but a boy. i guess even as an adult he will be hating being with a boy.
but with the intence sexual abuse i am wondering how he will be able to live. with such missery i can imagin as an adult he will have lots of thoughts of suicide.
and as time passes if he doesnt get away those thouhts will get stronger as he gets more depressed.

Comment by julie j on 03/04/05
this is a sad story but a gain a better start would make more enjoyable something explaiining how he got into this predicment in the first place it was intrsting but i feel more could have been done with it

Comment by jasmine on 01/27/05
well. no one has posted a commen in 4 years. like this story isnt worth it.
i dont agree. i like it. maybe a little sad and appears the treatment on the son was uncalled for. makes me angry. but its a good story.
with you could continue it and let him escape the forced marrage and sue the mother.

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 07/18/01
Well, you did it again!  Just 5k and my blood is boiling and my mind is exploding with unanswered questions that I'll probably have to use my own immagination to answer.  Damn you're good!  The one unusual thing, I guess is what the mother being in "the guard position" means.  Just one of the things I'm imagining is this wedding taking place in a mental institution where the court has placed her mixed up son. The groom is big enough to protect him against the other inmates.  Mom has, under an assumed name, gotten a guard job to continue her hold over him.  She manipulated him into the wedding, of course.

Comment by Trebor54 on 07/18/01
I'd like to see the mother get hers in a sequel. Your a very good writer, but I would like to see some revenge storys on the perpetrators.

Comment by Nellie D on 07/17/01
I can only hope that this hasn't happened to anyone. The actions of the mother are totally unforgivable. In my mind, she is a confirmed man hater bent on destroying her child. Her actions are cruel and self serving.

The only thing to redeem this story is the writing ability of the author.



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