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Memoirs of a CD
by Alyssa Davis

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Comment by see pron on 10/25/19
t1Z2nF wow, awesome article post.Thanks Again. Fantastic.

Comment by seo service on 09/06/13
udIfbo I really enjoy the post.Really looking forward to read more. Cool.

Comment by Buy oem Software on 02/11/12
NlJLYT Thanks for the news! Just was thinking about it! By the way Happy New Year to all of you:DD

Comment by Silvia. on 06/01/10
Good job Alyssa.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Aleesha on 10/28/08
Another good read, I was surprised by the ending.

Comment by DEE on 09/14/07
WHTA A GREAT STORY! I'M DEFINITELY ENVIOUS OF DALE. THYANKS FOR AN
ENJOYABLE READ.

Comment by mysty on 08/09/05
I really enjoyed this story. Very well done!

Comment by Happy Reader on 03/01/03
A very warm and up-lifting story!  I am pleased you maintained a hetro approach to a transgendered male.  This is very refreshing!

Comment by Jane Hudson on 03/03/02
Nice lovely story of sister helping brother and not normal beaten up forced to wear skirts story nice change .Loved it my dear

Comment by Frances El on 12/17/00
As usual, Alyssa produces an excellent story - well written, plot develops nicely and while it would be a plus to have more description of the feelings Alana has when dressing (especially in the early years, when it's almost always stimulating at the same time), this piece gives us a good description of Alana's progression to adulthood.

This could very easily be turned into a much longer story, if you wanted.

Thanks for a good read!

Fran

Comment by Nellie D on 12/17/00
A well written story about a boy coming of age in a female world. The world of his sister and her friends.

Comment by paul jutras on 12/17/00
well done story with characters that truely stand out.



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