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Marriage Switch
by Paul G Jutras

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Comment by Gerri on 07/21/11
That's going to make tihgns a lot easier from here on out.

Comment by Jeneva on 07/20/11
Ho ho, who wuloda thunk it, right?

Comment by Silvia. on 03/02/10
What a bad story you wrote Paula.
Bad,bad,bad story really.
Silvia.

Comment by Dianna on 04/11/08
Drop the 'sweet and sentimental' tag. It's a lie. Other than that, it's an okay story, but any advanced from me would be jaded do to my disgust at the way the characters were acting.

Comment by Ellie Dauber on 04/13/01
You're getting better and better, Paul.  Keep going with the longer stories.  Established universes are a great help in learning to do longer stories, since the background is already there.

The idea for this one was very good, bythe way.

Comment by KJ on 04/13/01
You are slowly growing as an author....Liked this story idea and basic way you wrote it!

In the future would be great to see a bit more length, not so rushed and fewer misspelled words.

Comment by Jennifer Allison on 04/12/01
I like your new story.



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