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Marcia
by Marcia Spencer

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Comment by kristen on 04/19/10
Dearest Marcia,

EXCELLENT!!!

No violence, rape, or harm. Only pure love, and beautiful descriptive
prose. Your descriptions of the lovely women are beyond wonderful.

Thank you for your hard work in authoring such a wonderful narrative. I hope you continue it. There is room for much more growth in your heroine.

Thank you again for your efforts. I greatly appreciate them.

Peace and Love,

kristen


Comment by Mina on 04/21/01
what can I say other than well done....I have to respect it even though the storyline is a bit lacking. the discriptions are stunning.I dug it with a passion.

Comment by Ilean Anne Jerque on 04/21/01
Well done.  Your story is well written and I really appericate that you proof-read it.  Please share more of your hard work with us.

Comment by Elaine on 04/19/01
I am enjoying this series and it's surprising no one has left a comment. my only negative is to make the paragraphs smaller. It makes reading a lot easier. A little less narration and more dialogue would make it superb.



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