Abi, you need an editor, the number of times you used defiantly instead of definitely was embarrassing. Also would someone go to an empty house with someone they didn't know that well, let alone have sex with them?

74yWvM There is a bundle to know about this. You made good points also.

Dear Abi,

I agree with some of the previous Posts. This IS a cute, short story. I, normally, do not have a lot of time, "playings," at the computer.

Miss Mary Ellen, my Mistress/Wife needed to have an M.R.I. at the Hospital. She had one of Her Girlfriends take her. I'm Her Sissy Housemaid/husband.

I'm surprised, that I can sit in the chair, in the Computer-room. Her Girlfriends just, "love," to lash me and make fun of Her Housemaid.

I'm sorry, I digress.

Your Story was, "just right," for me and at this time. Your developement of the main Character, Simon-Abi, encouraged me to, "read on."

While you wrote this some 15 years ago, our Gender-bending Society, has caught-up.

You haven't written anything more? At least, not on Storysite.

Sisterly yours,
Missy Susan

inHtTn I truly appreciate this article.Really looking forward to read more. Awesome.

a great wonderful story.

Hi Abi.
You wrote a sweet and lovely story.
I loved!
Kisses.
Silvia.

Absolutely loved your stories,keep up the good work

Excellent again.  Much better than JamieII but still in need of proofreading and editing ... and still that damned 'defiantly' has crept in!  All in all, kudos.  Keep up the good work!

Great story! a fantasy i have always had!

i really loved this story.

Cute story!... Short, but cute!

Cute story.... short, but cute!

Not bad, but too quick to allow sex on the first day as a girl

I thought it was a great story. It was a bit unlikely but the real world is so boring anyway! :)

Abi, this was great story. However, I wish that you would continue it and have Abi go home like that forgetting she is dressed as a waitress. That would be soooo cool.

Barb

Such a sweet story. I can't help but wish I'd had a job like that when I was 15.

what a lovely story i must say i enjoyed it so much keep up the good work          
love katie

Nice story I liked it and thought it quite good for a short story. I always like to read something written by someone in the UK as they always have a different way with the use of the english language compared to us in the U.S. It's a nice change to read these stories and this one was good.

Diane

I enjoyed your story, too, Abi. And what a strange coincidence--I read it just as I was finishing a section of my "Something Borrowed, Something BLue" where my hero/ine gets her turn as a waitress. Whether it's dollars or pounds, it's the tips that matter anyway. Thanks, and keep on writing.

Just to reply to your message Paul I used pounds because I'm British and the story is set in the UK, not America. Thanx for the support though

Male Waitress is good.  Though I don't know if you mis-type the dollars to be paid per hour or if it was mistype on purpose to be yen or something.  THe tale itself was good and worth reading.