Apologies everyone.  As the link for Andersonville 20 – The Cure was broken, I left my comments here.

Except for Judge Herns, the others left in the Court Room when Helen  vanished were astonished by the turn a around of David taking the role as a female and said so to the Judge.  The Judge said "I said he would go for it", and the others said "How" and the Judge said "Love transcends everything, he loved his family so much, he could not say no.  That is why I was hard on him.  He just needed a kick up the backside to get his brain into gear.  I am not heartless you know, I just act that way."

Hey Prue! Since 2009 anyone posted a comment?
Ok! Now in 2012 I am posting one!
You're a star, a big star. Your story is wonderful. One of the best stories I ever read!
Kisses.
Silvia.

unreal, cant say ive enjoyed any other story as much as this one,,,keep up the good work

This was a wonderful and entertaining story. It also wakened the idea in me that I could be attracted to a man. How shocking.

Gwen

This story is very good and I liked very much,thanks for sharing

A tale that kept me entertain until the end.  So, when do we get to see a second chapter.

WG

    Prue:  I just reread this story as I wanted to compare simularities between it and your current project.  They both deal with alien life forms.  The only things that I could find that were prevalent are, Your ongoing talent to tell a good story, and your ability to make everything work out in the end with a happy ending.
  I wish you continued succes in all your projects, as I know they will be terrific as well.  I impatiently await the next "gem" to be polished.   Thank you.
             Your devoted fan: Rebecca Anne.

    Prue:  I just reread this story again because of your information on Identikit.   They are both dealing with alien life forms, and I wished to compare the simularities between them. The only simularities that were prevalent are, your continuing talent to tell a finely crafted story.  Oh yes there was one other simularity, the knack you have for creating happy endings.  Must be part of your good Karma.   Please keep up the good work.
    Your devoted fan: Rebecca Anne.

I agree with d hargus, The story was too short. The author had a lot to say but didn't take the time to say it, giving the story a rushed feeling. I think that another 50 to 100k would have smoothed it out nicely. Add a little more conflict, and get a little more into Angela's head as she comes to accept her new form.
   Also, An Indian is an American motorcycle. The British army had Enfields, Triumphs, Nortons,and Matchless motorcycles among others. Not a big thing, but I like old bikes and that one kind of jumped out at me.
    Over all a good story, it just needs a little polish.
Mr.Ram

This was a great story. It reminded me of another story, "The Fifth Element" Which was an interesting good over evil story and an extraterestial had to help save the world. The plot was great, and it would make a great movie I think, much like the "Mummy" and "The Mummy Returns" It is an adventure!

Keep up the good writing you did very well.

Hugs
Joni

I've had the pleasure to watch this story grow and develop from just a small idea, to the big sweeping story that it became. I've also had the pleasure of watching Prue get better and better with her writing. This is the kind of complex, sophisticated story I don't think she would or could have written a year or even a few months ago. But now, she pulls it all off quite well, secure in her own talents as a storyteller.

The story itself is a big bold tale of aliens and action, a classic sci-fi theme. It has humor, romance, action, and danger, a little something for everyone I guess. So read it, enjoy it, and enjoy all the other fine stories that Prue has given us.

Thanks for the story.

A crowning achievement by a master of the art! Walker paints an elaborate tapestry of action and emotion, thrilling us with the brushstrokes of her awesome talents.

But still yet.....It's not as good as John's Gift!

Prue -- simply a great story, one that is a must read.  I enjoyed reading this story from start to finish -- the action never stopped. It appears that this story could be continued, and one day you will do this that.  You certainly have a way of writing great stories.  Thanks for sharing this story with us, and for being a great friend.  In inspire me in many ways.  *Hugs*  Kelly

Wonderful story that it was, it really was too short, and could have used more action.  Even within the confines of its brevity, it still conveyed a sense of action and had good character development.