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I have to say, I feel that Maria got the short end of the stick. I feel guilty to say that I sort of wished she had been killed by accident, or at least for her to see those who had turned her one last time.

And reject them. I guess I'm just strange that way, oh well. Here's to you Maria, I hope you are better than those who made you.

i feel this is a great story i also feel that someone is going to pay for what has happened to maria i hope to read in further parts of an attempt to escape so far the 2 parts i have read are great well done

Couldn't stop reading the stories.  There are so many situations that I myself have experienced.  I like the way the story line keeps moving from one situation to another while maintaining the continuity.  Further, the situations seem to be quite 'normal' and shows no sign of leaning towards obscenity.  Good, good, I like it.

I've been reading A Maiden Gamble on Fictionmania so far but the story seems to end on part 11 there and I knew there were 12 parts. Since this site has the whole story, and since Sydney seems to be more active here, I've decided to switch my future comments to StorySite. I know I've said this before but if this story continues the way it has gone so far I will declare it the best tg story I've ever read. It suits my tastes in particular because I like more realistic stories and this is the most beliveable tg story I've read to date. No magic or super-science on the one hand, no instant transformation to a slut with the mear application of a dress and some make-up on the other. As far as I know there are no documented cases of true forced fem, but this reads almost like a documentary. Take for example part eight, the most recent one I read, wherein Maria gives her first blow job to a man. As presented the act is a logical progression of the way things have been going. Maria doesn't look forward to doing it but she really has no choice. And yet Thomas is not the typical tg story male rapist. He is kind, considerate and not real sure he wants to do this thing. He's really only helping out his wife. He is the perfect first man for Maria and thus she accepts him probably more readily than even she expected. Even so, when he comes, she gags and lets the spunk hit her face and the floor. A natural reaction, unlike the typical sissy tale where the victim sucks up cum like a vacume cleaner and then begs for more. And then there's DeeDee in the audience doing a slow boil. She liked Maria from the start and is becoming more and more attracted the more female Maria gets. She'd like Maria to love her, but how can she when DeeDee has beat her, betrayed her and treated her like an object? Maria's delayed reation with the stake knife shows that the male Anton still exists dispite everything. In a typical tg story Maria by this point might be asking for implants not trying to cut off the breasts she already has.
Whew! Sorry for being long winded but this is a superior series and I had to get my thoughts out of my system. I'll write again soon.

You sure make the reader cheer for Anton.  I hope he is not broken, just learned patience and has an increased desire to kill the bitches!  Compared to the way these women treat him, the Taliban is made up of gentlemen.