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Lorijo's Salon Incident
by Lorijo Baily

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Comment by i love pron on 12/21/18
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Comment by mike on 06/02/09
wow!!!! NOW THAT IS WHAT BEAUTIFUL HAIR IS ALL ABOUT.AN OBJECT OF DESIRE.WHAT A FANTASTIC SALON SCENE.I WOULD LOVE TO BE DONE LIKE LORIJO.

Comment by vivki on 05/03/08
Loved your story and the way you understand how beautiful hair makes a man want to cum in it. Please write another story about a pageboy styling and some good cocksucking by the girlie boy.

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 11/06/01
I don't think I'll read further episodes.  Your a good writer, and I am really disappointed that you decided to take the story in this little girl sex direction.  This started out as a believable fantasy, one that could possibly happen.  If the age reduction theme continues, how long before Jenny has her looking 10?  Right now you've got a child (He believes she's 17.) abusing hairdresser and that really took all the enjoyment out of the hair salon scene for me.  I wish you had continued in the sweet direction you began.



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