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Lorijo at the Mall
by Lorijo Baily

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Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 06/24/01
I'm really enjoying Lorijo's story.  I would love to read a detailed scene where she gets a perm and has her hair put into an elegant updo with cascading curls, formal makeup, and corsetted and dressed for the prom or as a bride or bridesmaid.  I can't wait till she goes to work fully dressed.  I'm a bit apprehensive about the ending to part 3 though; I hope Jenny doesn't turn out to be nasty, exploiting Lorijo.

Comment by kimber on 06/22/01
This is a great story. I thought I would add my comments after this latest part. Anyways, its a wonderful story that leads the reader in my opinion to become a part of the story. I truly wanted to be a part or at least switch with Lorijo! I look forward to more on this one! A must read!!

kimber



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