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The Long Road
by Janet L. Stickney

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Comment by Mariah on 04/15/13
 Great story from every angle, especially when daddy's iron fisted discipline turned out to be the blessing of life for Julie's permanent emergence in real life!  I fell right into character as I read, how wonderful if only I could have been Julie with her wonderful caring friends and family.

Comment by Alyssa on 08/01/08
Once again a great read, very good that Julie's friends understood her at the end there, the best way to be in my opinion.  Keep a close circle of friends, and all the friends in that circle can be trusted with pretty much anything ^^

Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/05/07
Great story Janet! Jeff becomes Julie. Poor dad in his anger gives her the power to become the woman within. And Bruce, her bst friend keeps her secret. After her friends find out, she finds acceptance and love. Her dad finally accepts her new self. Janet, may your long  road end in JOY!!!



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