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Little Girl Lost
by Ann O'Nonymous

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Comment by Elizabeth Cathryn Mystery on 10/15/23
This is a delightful story.  However, I felt one thing was left out of the Epilogue.

In all the years since Jennie was rescued she never ever forgot what Jenny had did for her and they kept in close contact for the rest of their lives.  In fact Jennie became a God Mother to Jenny's and Marti's first child and she gives all their children regular presents.


Comment by Silvia. on 09/09/10
WOW, Ann!
You wrote a great story. Sweet and lovely.
I liked.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Sharon on 04/08/10
Such a beautiful story.The dream for every Crossdresser to live fultime as a lady.

Comment by Jeff on 05/09/08
We all should be so lucky, indeed. It's a beautiful fantasy, and about as far from my cynical experience of how the real world works as possible. I picture myself in that scenario, and see accusations of "pervert" and "child molester" being hurled at me, I see the Little Girl Found being whisked away for McMartin Preschool-style interviews where the investigators brainwash her into believing their bizarre accusations, followed by the trial and media circus... I'd be afraid even if I wasn't crossdressed, seeing as how men are constantly under a cloud of suspicion these days when it comes to children!

Comment by Rone Welles on 08/16/06
  Way to go, nice clean honest loving story , we should all be so lucky  why can,t the world be nicer.....
  peace  rone  

Comment by Sissy Baby Paula on 07/30/06
Being re-reading some stories. I have read this story over and over again ... I just love it for the sweetness of it. And how accepting the little child was - completely without the prejudices of adults!

Hugs,
Sissy Baby Paula and Snowball (my toy puppy)


Comment by Stacie on 05/22/05
    A very sweet, lovely story! Please keep up the good work.                                                                         Love, Stacie

Comment by juliej on 03/03/05
this as a very good nice ending story it was intresting that the mother understood jenny aka bill and trusted him after the first meeting i feel it was also very good that bill explained himself honestly at the first stage great mind & a great story with a happy end well done

Comment by Tanya on 03/26/04
Little Girl Lost was a wonderful, warm, story. I enjoyed the tale. I saw only one thing wrong, (In my point of view). You kept switching from he to she and back again when refering to Jenny, this was confusing.
I am a writer and have had a few stories published, I always use the pronoun "He" when reffering to my crossdressed hero.
You might want to use the same pronoun, masculine or feminine, but not both; just a suggestion.

Comment by Gray on 02/10/03
A very good story, Lack of sex makes it better.

Comment by Nellie D on 04/08/01
A very nice story of a caring person and a lost/kidnapped child. Ann has produced another fine story.

Comment by Amanda on 04/08/01
Sweet, handled the difficult questions well. A child's unquestioning love is a beautiful thing and was not misused in this story.

Thanks Amanda



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